Looking for abit of help

[granite hedge]

Currently working on this lovey sketch. Looking for any critique or advice. Red lining is fine, helps me understand what you're talking about.

[tall eagle]

(If it helps.) You could redo the wings to make them look more attached to the character and less like a flat image behind him.

[granite hedge]

Its does help! Thank you!

[granite hedge]

Hello! I did some adjustments to the sketch. I think the wings look a little better, maybe? The anatomy looks a little better on the face. Anything else I should fix or does it look good?

[tall eagle]

It looks really good!