feedback for this artwork?

[mortal oriole]

just general feedback and critique for this artwork. thanks!

[honest whale]

I love the bold pose and the aesthetic! That rendering is beautiful but it gets a little lost As everything is very saturated, to make your rendering pop, you may want a cooler accent colour for the shadows and some darker areas on the figure

The fact that for the shadow you’ve kept the same red of a similar value to define the shapes, it makes the whole thing a little hard to read