#Im losing my mind

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bold saddle
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I cant get the foreshortening right on the torso. It just looks off

plain narwhal
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is the torso turning towards the camera, while the legs move the opposite way?
or is the character floating towards the viewer, no twisting or bending?
I'm not sure what the motion intent here is

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plain narwhal
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hmmmmm

bold saddle
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i changed it up a bit but it more or less shares the basics

plain narwhal
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if not this, you could kick out the left leg like how the right is in the ref image

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a straight out leg with the top of the foot level with the leg always looks fine

bold saddle
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You made the torso longer too?

plain narwhal
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slightly, yea

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and got rid of the muscle behind the shoulder

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it seemed too burly and threw off the angle, atleast I think

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like even this straight leg would be cool

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actually nvm, first is better

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I'll try it

plain narwhal
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right on, good luck, hope that helps

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thank you

fair perch
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I think u can use some guidelines and shapes to make sure the proportions are right!

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basically just breaking down what you already got into raw basic 3D objects and seeing how they all fit together and if it makes sense

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atleast that’s what I think he’s talking about

fair perch
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Exactly

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I think this graph will help u

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Imagine the body is transparent and draw this on the back

bold saddle
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@fair perch so would it be kinda like this?

fair perch
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Yeah precisely

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Looks much better

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Does it look proportional though?

fair perch
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I think the chest is a bit smaller than it should be

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Try lining it out but keep the scheme underneath

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I cant quite see since its overlapping the drawing

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But it should be proportionally correct!

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It is proportional

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fair perch
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Did it too fast but

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The size is good

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U should never look at anime characters for reference

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Always use real people

bold saddle
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i dunno man. I see sum people built like one piece characters /j

fair perch
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HAHAHAHA

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We are laughing but one piece is great for anatomy

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Oda knows his shit