Improvement?

[golden yew]

I need some opinions/tips 😭 I tried to make it like a psychic with a ghost but I feel like I got too messy with the lighting. Not very good with lighting lol pls lmk if you have some tips for me 🙏

[short scroll]

i love the effect you had going with the lights, but if you make the hallway darker it might draw your eyes closer to the focal point (the character in the middle) and may help the composition

but you'd definitely wanna put some rim lights on her head from the light on the wall behind her

also excuse my poorly drawn cast shadows, but it might help to pronounce the lighting

[golden yew]

@short scroll thank you sm!! I’ll apply these changes later!! Those definitely help

[remote rain]

Your drawing has a lot of potential but i think there are some problems. I’ll show you

The anatomy doesn’t look perfect, have you ever tried to do any study of the anatomy? Or using any reference? I would higly recommend that!!! References are really important.