#Any tips or critique?
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hey! it sort of looks like his torso specifically is a bit stiff. he looks like hes sitting straight up, instead of the lounging pose i think youre trying to go for. Maybe make his torso lean diagonally towards the side with his arm more?
What do you think about this? I just added a little bit of light on the edges of the character
Helloo, imma tell you everything i liked about it: It is a scene, it's a guy sitting in a chair with a dramatic light so that's nice, i also like his facial expression. One thing i think could be improved is to don't use black as a shadow. Black is a really strong color, the strongest of values and it can give kinda of a blindness effect when used so much. It took me a while to reconize the scene( the wall, the chair, specially the legs) because of the amout of black and the color intensity. Hope you keep on drawing! practice is key
I didn't use black I used a dark blue but thank you! I'll definitely take that into consideration! ^^
Oooh! Thank you! I didn't know how much rim lighting I should ask since this is my first time doing this kind of lighting. I appreciate it though!!
I was trying to make it look more like he was lounging, thank you! I'll definitely try to make some changes to it ^^