How do I make this look more badass

[bronze moss]

im on the quest to draw something really cool. I was wondering how I could make this look better.

The character is supposed to be La Pluma form Arknights

[bright talon]

more foreshortening on the leg perhaps

gimme a min

[bright talon]

@bronze moss

like that perhaps

[bronze moss]

I'll try it out. Thank you ♥

[bright talon]

np

[narrow spire]

Emphasize the twist on the torso

The waist area is a bit flat and if you emphasized the torque and tension it would boost the pose

Also the composition

[bronze moss]

How would I do that?

[narrow spire]

One second

This make sense?

[bronze moss]

Not really

[narrow spire]

Box as the torso, sphere as the shoulder joint

[twilit monolith]

you cannot

it's badass enough