#is my lineart good?

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tribal parrot
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I don't normally have any problem with my lineart, but this time I think there's some choices I made that might be looking out of place.

Things I didn't like:

  • The hole on the bells
  • The star on the neck
  • The freckles

Am I crazy or am I right? pain They do look off or not? Or is there something else that I didn't notice?

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is my lineart good?

sullen harness
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Oh my god it's amazing

tribal parrot
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I think it looks really good! Maybe try curving the hole shapes to make it look like the bells are more rounded?