Bojji - Ranking of Kings (Any tips?)

[raven grove]

No tips. This looks amazing!

[thin spire]

Looks nice overall :D I would mainly push further on the composition to indulge more appeal into it

[graceful spear]

What specifically can I do for the composition?

This is the second version as well

But I really want to know what to add or what to do, to I guess just to add final touches

[thin spire]

Currently not on computer so it's a bit hard to describe, but basically rule of thirds

If you're not aware what that is, try looking up for basic compositions. If you're aware, try adjusting the position to match the grid

[graceful spear]

I do think I see what you mean, however here's the reference:

I projected it on the camera, but now comparing it, I see what you mean...

The objects look a bit bigger than the image, but sometimes they look smaller... and other times they don't see as big...

There's a mis-correlation with a few things, and I do say I could have improved in a lot...

I guess I tried to resemble it as much to the point I didn't get to see the entire picture. Thank you