I am looking to do commissions soon, and I would like to know how I can improve. I don't know what I should improve on, but something seems off about it. Thanks if you can help!
#What can I do to improve this drawing of an abandoned garden?
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What you may be struggling with is balance. To show focus on the subject (which my eye sees as the flower) try adding a bold line around it to make it pop. Another thing you can do to bring the flower forward is color the lines different colors besides black. Hope this helps!