I want some advice on the composition/anatomy of this pice or if you see something else thats off that is more than welcome too minus anything about the sketchy lineart(its still a wip)
#composition help?
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cedar flame
i think the arm is not in perspective, the elbow shohld overlap and the lower arm les visibility (moved to the left)
regal tundra
I’d say fill in the leftover space. as everything in crowded in the right hand corner, your eye is drawn to the negative space. Maybe place some boxes or a door over there