sketch critiques

[half crest]

How's this sketch look? :3

[pastel elk]

i feel the hand may be too small, remember a hand should be able to cover a face, and the eyes are uneven, the right one being smaller then the other
other then that looks good!

[half crest]

Okay!! Make the hand bigger, noted!

And the thing about the eyes, uneven as in ones too high up? I didn't notice that at first! The difference in size was supposed to resemble sort of a squinched eye? Is there any way I could get that across better?

Is this any version better?

I still wanna make the eyes droopy and sleepy looking with the one kind of squinting, but I'm not super sure how to get that across

[pastel elk]

hmmm, could i redline? (also sorry for late reply, im used to pings)

[half crest]

Go right ahead!! And no worries, sorry for the lack of ping haha

[pastel elk]

its fine lol, gimme a min and ill have the redline done

a bit more like this maybe?

adding extra lines on top for the eyelid would help

i would also increase the size of the right eye (the one thats more squinted) just a bit more, or make it wider whichever works better

@half crest

[half crest]

Thanks a bunch!! I'll definitely make more tweaks tomorrow. Would you mind if I pinged you to see how it looks once I have?

@pastel elk

[pastel elk]

sure! i might not respond right away tho, but dont let that hold you back from continuing the drawing, you can always change the eyes later