#Any Critique please or anything to improve

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marble trail
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just any constructive criticism, or anything i should improve based on this recent drawing, i feel like there's a lot of things i can do better i just dont know what or where to start, thanks in advance!

plush star
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I feel like the mouth is almost invisible in a way

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I can see it, but its pretty hard to notice

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But overall?

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Looks Awesome!

marble trail
keen violet
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Very nice dynamic pose

My only critique is her breast. Can you try removing the contour line ?? Or make it less prominent. If you don't like how it looks afterwards, you should keep the original version haha. Just my opinion. Because it's in the direct lightsource and Lynette's breast isn't that big to create contour line

ebon sapphire
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I'm a very beginner artist so I can't give any good critisism but I like this art piece alot! It looks really pretty and smooth!