Anything I should work on??

[trim knoll]

just need feedback + opinions on my art

[vapid shard]

Hiii, your style is so cool. 💯

The light and shadows are so good and the rendering too in general.
The first girl is so pretty. 😱💯

In my personal opinion, I prefer the drawing with black lineup, but in your case, the results are good. 🤗

(Sorry for my poor english 😢)

[timber jewel]

hello!!
first of all, i love your artstyle it's really pretty and the colors make that pretty visual armony.

i think maybe you can do a more complex background? just that i want to say. ut everything else it's just perfect.

(sorry my bad english T T)

[open oyster]

I think you've got a clear style for your characters etc, so it would be awesome if you started to branch out with backgrounds and maybe more clothes etc