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short plaza Sep 3, 2023, 9:32 AM

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How do I make thy art bettar?

acoustic phoenix Sep 3, 2023, 9:54 AM

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Hm... It's a simple drawing but It is not too bad. What I recommend though is that you work a bit on your construction. It's an important fundamental that Will help you get the forms and proportions right and does wonders with foreshortening when needed

short plaza Sep 3, 2023, 9:59 AM

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Thank you

acoustic phoenix Sep 3, 2023, 10:44 AM

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short plaza Thank you

That's what we are here for 🙂

short plaza Sep 3, 2023, 11:04 AM

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Changed some things. not that noticeable i guess?

visual oasis Sep 3, 2023, 11:50 AM

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why not try adding a background? like it could be on the floor burning out maybe?

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it will add depth

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looks good the smoke

#feels bit off.