any critique??

[cobalt crane]

Idk but something seems off about this drawing. Any thought?

[covert thorn]

Great lighting, good poses good everything art-wise, only thing i can say needs some work is the freckles, more specifically their placement.

[cobalt crane]

Why? The placement is wrong ?

[peak leaf]

they're a bit condenced if that makes sense? theres a lot in a small area, unless it's your style, but typically people with freckles have them more spread around (i would know, i have freckles lol)

[covert thorn]

yup, irl freckles aren't just on the cheeks they are all over the face and body usually.
if the character just doesn't have freckles on the rest of his body that's fine, but it adds some slight realism to them.

[peak leaf]

thats true, but theres also way too many in the area they are placed, removing a few would fix the "condenced" issue

[covert thorn]

Maybe have the highlights be a little more pronounced on their hair. that's me stretching for anything else to say. the light seems a little too hard of an edge for a soft highlight.

[cobalt crane]

I also have them and it’s so funny that i’m not able to draw them decently

[peak leaf]

no no its fine, like i said just remove a few here and there and it's fine

@cobalt crane youc could try something like this, its not great bc i was just doing it quickly

[cobalt crane]

Okay okay! I’ll try thank you