#still a learning artist but I’d love to hear what I should fix in the future
vague mirage
And started as a base from Pinterest
a bit late, but for one, if you did i wouldn't trace bases, again that's if you did, if you didn't then you're fine, but i would recommend you think of how the bodies connect instead of directly referencing it
the character designs look very well done if they're your oc's
the coloring is very nice too, maybe some more shadows/darker shadows would help your piece as well!
as for the faces, some look a bit odd so i could work on that, proportions
Thats all i can think of rn, very cute tho :>
oh crap, i didnt see the unfinished part, so ignore me saying add more shadows, u obviously havent added them yet 
worthy birch
Thank you!!! Yes they aren’t all my OCs but the top blue one is mine haha, I’ll be sure to use these tips, thank you so much!!