#thoughts on oc design

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elfin garnet
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ive never made an oc before, give me your thoughts on mine and how i can make it a bit more unique. gonna work on adding some more iconic details and making a better silhouette soon. spoiler just in case

distant basin
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this is in my personal opinion
id say maybe give her a tattoo or something on her thigh if youre planning to keep the bodysuit? and maybe a more action packed/ dynamic pose

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also if youre going for a specific clothing style id recommend looking on pinterest! your oc seems like a cyberpunk kind of gal (genuine :3)

silk night
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whenever im designing an outfit for a character i try to think of what a low-effort cosplayer would look like

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your character should be specific enough that theyre still recognizable in a low-effort cosplay

vagrant vale
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Good aspect to keep/ focus on:

Shape language: repeating shapes of box (collar, top, sleeves) and triangle (cut on the top, the rise of the bottom, sharp eyes and soft triangle in bangs)

Colours: black, white purple and green. very clear, readable colour combo! Maybe add some purple on the clothes/ eyes/ hair/staff as well so that its part of the design.

To work on:

Scale: Some areas are bit too small, the hands, the jewel, parts of the hair. Making them bigger would make the character more porpotionate and make the details pop more.

The staff: the staff doesnt really have any of the design elements the character has, it look very plain and not liek it her staff.

overall, there is something pretty nice about the design.