#Any criticism\tip?

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hexed rampart
brazen plank
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I don’t know if it’s just the style, but the arm seems a little stiff, kinda like a roblox character. Maybe fix that to make the pose more dynamic

torn laurel
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the torso seem a bit flat& stiff, it might help to draw the center lline in a curved/ rounded fashion instead of straight one. the hips area seems a bit short. rising the bellybutton would make it a bit more proportionate. Also paying attention to the alingement of different 'planes', Its a pretty diffivult perspective to draw from

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for example, the chest seems to be aligned differentely from the body