Any critique before I start rendering?

[livid bison]

Can i draw over your drawing? I will show it

[wooden dew]

Looks really cute but maybe the face is little bit too long

[wooden dew]

You can easily shorting it with no effort °^°

[past owl]

Ofc

[next lake]

The boy's face and the fishbowl are making a near/complete tangent (lines between the two seem to become one). Tangents in art tend to be unsettling for the eye, and if that's not your goal, a good way to fix this is to either have the boy's face and fishbowl overlap significantly more or to completely separate the two. I hope this helps ^-^

[past owl]

Made some adjustments, feedback?

[lilac kettle]

you could lower the ceiling