posing/fluidity tips?

[austere igloo]

this feels so stiff if anyone has anythoughts?

[tidal kestrel]

imo i think the character sitting on the chair is fine, but the one laying on the ground feels very disconnected in terms of body language (besides the head)

did you have the intention of the character on the ground to be reliant (for lack of better words) towards the one in the chair?

[austere igloo]

hes obsessed with the one in the chair but he tends to have a far off stare im trying for a haunted look

[brisk nacelle]

I agree with nomi here, also I actually think that the stickman sketch at the top right corner is a bit better in terms of the pose for the guy on the ground

Might be because when he’s turned and curled up a bit more to the side it gives off the impression that he’s touching their leg with more feeling and intent, so he’s not just okay with it but actively…wants??? to be close to the person??? Sorry my english is not englishing today!

[brisk nacelle]

(I’m assuming it is obsession as in idolising the "subject of love", unless that’s not what u meantt)

[austere igloo]

Yes very much!!