#how can i improve this so far

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besides the bunny being unfinished what can i do to improve this??

i can’t fix the boy in the mirrors pose cuz my dumbass colored it on the wall layer LMAO so uhh

slim mural
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just eyedrop the wall and paint over him to fix..?

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it’s also the lineart, all of the color, the mirror and a lot of the texturing stuff

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  • i’m too lazy so
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i ain’t doing allat

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dim light on top

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:3 then donnie's tiddy is too big

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HAHHA

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okok will reduce titty

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big as in like width or just the shading

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shading c:

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thank you!

woeful ivy
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tbh you could fix it pretty easily by just putting his torso in perspective justaaaaa tinge, but ALSO i think what could take away fromthe pose looking stiff is since it a mirror why dont you just take a textured brush and add in a gradient coming from the bottom?

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you can make the gradient either light or dark just add some texture in there

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actually, yes make the gradient dark

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I just saw that you saw the light is coming from the top

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quick example of what i meant

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ryu always be my life saver 😭😭and grab, that would be much better. it also looks a lot cooler. also wydm in perspective btw?

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woeful ivy
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think of yourself leaning on the counter with your hands in that pose, your lower body goes back a little

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oHhhh

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U RIGHHT

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i think i can liquify it

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ermmm is this better

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grrr