are you contructing the body with shapes?
#help
dark hound
would recommend learning human anatomy even if you draw in a stylized way, you need to know the rules to break them
though your lines are clean and arent wobbly which is v good
fluid jolt
this is super cute and i don't know if it's a style preference but maybe slightly shading it could give some more depth!
dark hound
i would say the line of action is fine (though not very dynamic), but what i like to do is alternate which side of th hips/shoulders/head is to make it mroe interesting to look at. can post what im talking abt later tonight if you want