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pine wagonBOT
gentle forge
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pog

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@void onyx

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Can you rate it

void onyx
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There's a few things I can see

gentle forge
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That are bad?

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Or good?

void onyx
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There's some things that you have declared at the top of the script that are only used once, so it makes sense to only declare it where you need it.

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like HeadLookVector

gentle forge
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Oh

void onyx
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that should be declared inside your UIS function

gentle forge
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Fixed

void onyx
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Typically you want to keep scopes as small as possible, unless you have a reason to declare outside of that scope

gentle forge
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Aight

void onyx
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Like your boolean values "isAlreadyHolding" etc, those need to be tracked between multiple functions so it makes sense to keep them outside

gentle forge
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So I did that correct

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Boom

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s star baby

void onyx
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You shouldn't have that task.wait at the top

gentle forge
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shit

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wait

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what task.wait?

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I don't see any task.wait

void onyx
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lol

gentle forge
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oof but then it doesn't wait for character and stuff to load

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and glitches the thing

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waitforchild doesn't work

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for some reason

void onyx
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So you put in waits in the correct spots

gentle forge
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gives an error

void onyx
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what's the point of this? lua local partMagnitude = part.Position.Magnitude local playerMagnitude = hrp.Position.Magnitude

gentle forge
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Just remembered now

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damn

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so

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it's not a finished creation

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f

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so

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boom

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I got s2 is the bottom line

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cool

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awesome

void onyx
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Sure it is, it's a finished script to take input and fire the server with a vector

gentle forge
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Wait

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Hold up

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I was jokin-

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I will take it

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Ok

void onyx
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LOL

gentle forge
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Awesome

void onyx
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Well, I know you've been struggling with some parts of this, but I also know you've learned a lot.

gentle forge
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I have

void onyx
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See if you can get someone else to vouch s2 for you

gentle forge
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smort

gentle forge
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OHHHH CHRISTMAS ITSOOOO

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@severe forge

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Christmas Itso has joined the chat

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Christmas Itso requests to gtfo before he loses his brain cells due to communication with food

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Christmas

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Can you vouch for my s2

void onyx
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He's borderline. I'm wondering if he's learned enough to make the promotion.

gentle forge
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uh

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uh

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uh

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OHHH EYYYEEBALLL

severe forge
gentle forge
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Basically a god

severe forge
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lol

severe forge
gentle forge
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@void onyx

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You heard it here folks

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Featured Creator and Scripter II Christmas J. Itso has agreed to vouch for food's Scripter II role

void onyx
severe forge
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hmmmm

halcyon orchid
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what is the purpose of this script anyways?

gentle forge
void onyx
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Yes I did troll

halcyon orchid
gentle forge
severe forge
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lol

gentle forge
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Tbh I don't really care lol

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cause it's not patented

halcyon orchid
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But it definitely looks complex for my small brain,

gentle forge
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pog

halcyon orchid
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Because I know like no scripting.

gentle forge
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f

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I'm prob gonna bug fix this little potato crap of a code and then make it useful for all parts.

gentle forge
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Awesome

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Why did everyone leave me.

severe forge
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lol

gentle forge
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I'm not that annoying

gentle forge
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10, 9, 8, 7

severe forge
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wut

gentle forge
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jkjkjk

severe forge
gentle forge
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Cool!

severe forge
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I believe you do know enough topics and have the ability to be labeled as intermediete

gentle forge
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POG

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@void onyx

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You can't argue

severe forge
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lol

gentle forge
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I won't let you argue >:(((

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jkjkjk

void onyx
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Ok, I'll put you in as a very low s2. You need to put a lot of this feedback into practice though

severe forge
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🥳

gentle forge
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very low s2

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I'll get to work on my next project soon

timber obsidian
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input, GameProcessedEvent

inconsistent capitalisation ascent

severe forge
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lol

gentle forge
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Maybe a part moving in the pattern of the fibonacci sequence

gentle forge
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NO

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DON'T TELL BAHA

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HE'LL PUT ME AS A S 0.5

timber obsidian
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i dont think he rlly cares about that for ranking lol

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ur actual code matters more

gentle forge
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ok

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I'll work on a pickpocketing system next

cobalt grotto
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congrats

gentle forge
bitter stag
thorn python
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isalreadyHolding

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im crying

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iscloseEnough

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partMagnitude

thorn python
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please

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make me a sandwich

gentle forge
olive junco
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Die