💬 pulpizzaʹs Feedback

[raw marsh]

it looks nice, the only flaw i noticed is that there is 0 rotation in the terrain parts, they are all straight and perpendicular. Idk if it is intented, everything else looks fire

[keen gorge]

i agree, literally first thing i saw

but overall it's pretty fire

[stone locust]

Yes, it's how the client wanted it.

Thank you for the great feedback. I'll rotate it next commission that has a similar style, more variations!

[neon jay]

Whoa I like the deepwoken style, this kinda looks like Minitsrya. I kinda want to learn how to make deepwoken-y builds. This is great

[stone locust]

Thank you

[neon jay]

I want to learn how to make these kinda deepwoken-y builds. Is it hard? How should I start?

@stone locust

[stone locust]

I suggest experimenting with the terrain, and lighting, @neon jay

[neon jay]

Best build I’ve done ever is this. Not really good. What may I improve?

[neon jay]

Thanks by the way

[stone locust]

I suggest adding trees, and improve your lighting

[neon jay]

Ok then. How may I make the map bigger? What may I add? Big rocks? Docks? Please give advice…

And I am fascinated how you use simple materials to make a such a grand scene

[neon jay]

@stone locust

[stone locust]

More mountains!

To add more depth, and levels if that's what you like

[neon jay]

Oh you mean like big mountain having kinda open space before another one and such

Got it

Like in Minitsrya from deepwoken

[stone locust]

Yeah!

[neon jay]

Ok thanks. By the way, is it possible to get b1 with those kinda builds? Like deepwoken-y blocky builds etc?

Or does it need to be smooth?

And not blocky?

[neon jay]

Deepwoken builds are like these btw

[stone locust]

I think so

[stone locust]

This would get you b1

[neon jay]

Ahh. I get it. Even blocky builds can be good if you work on the placements and lightning. Thanks for your time and advice!

[stone locust]

No problem. Keep up the work

[neon jay]

Thank you. Is it ok if I sometimes send my builds to you for feedback?

[stone locust]

Yeah, no problem for me. Just DM it or @ me

[neon jay]

Ok then