im lowk a dumbass and i need help

[thick mirage]

idk whats wrong

l```lua
local Part = script.Parent

Part.Touched:Connect(function(otherPart)
local Humanoid = otherPart.Parent:WaitForChild("Humanoid")

if Humanoid then
    Humanoid.Health = 50
local Egg = math.random(1, 800)

while Egg <= 800 do
        if Egg <= 10 then
            print("???")
        elseif Egg <= 75 then
            print("Godly")
        elseif Egg <= 185 then
            print("Mythic")
        elseif Egg <= 285 then
            print("Legendary")
        elseif Egg <= 385 then
            print("Epic")
        elseif Egg <= 485 then
            print("Rare")
        elseif Egg <= 585 then
            print("Uncommon")
        elseif Egg <= 700 then
            print("Common!")
        elseif Egg == 800 then
            print("You're a Bum.")
            task.wait(2)
        if Egg == 5 then
            break
            
            end
        end

end
    
end

end)

@fading shore

[fluid zodiac]

** You are now Level 1! **

[deft dirge]

what do u need help with

[thick mirage]

it wont work

the break

or wtv

[deft dirge]

well, all it does is bring a useless loop and get egg's value once

[stray drum]

Try not to use waitforchild in this situation

[thick mirage]

buy

but

i thought u have to use it

since

i dont want it launching as soon as i run the game

[stray drum]

that’s what the “if Humanoid” is for

[thick mirage]

i wnat it to like keep telling u what u got and then break after a bit

[thick mirage]

so i use findfirst child?

[stray drum]

Yes

[deft dirge]

local Humanoid = otherPart.Parent and otherPart.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
if not Humanoid then return end

[stray drum]

Also what’s the script doing

[thick mirage]

idk

i js want it to give you a result with the math.random thing

[thick mirage]

where do i put that

im ed

[stray drum]

local Humanoid = otherPart:FindFirstChild(“Humanoid”) or nil

if not Humanoid then return end

[thick mirage]

mb

[thick mirage]

i thought humanoid will always be true

[deft dirge]

otherpart is the part that touched, the model is the parent

[stray drum]

I hate scripting on a phone

[stray drum]

i don’t understand

[thick mirage]

bru

like

yk

how in simulator games

when u roll a pet

[stray drum]

also you don’t need a while loop

[thick mirage]

what loop do i nede

need

[stray drum]

so look

That entire function will start every time a player touches the part

Instead of a while loop just do the if statements

You don’t need a loop if it’s going to give you a item every time it’s touched otherwise it’ll infinitely print until you hit the 5

[deft dirge]

Part.Touched:Connect(function(otherPart)
    local Humanoid = otherPart.Parent and otherPart.Parent:FindFirstChild("Humanoid")
    if not Humanoid then return end

    if Humanoid then
        local Egg = math.random(1, 800)
        
        if Egg <= 10 then
            print("???")
        elseif Egg <= 75 then
            print("Godly")
        elseif Egg <= 185 then
            print("Mythic")
        elseif Egg <= 285 then
            print("Legendary")
        elseif Egg <= 385 then
            print("Epic")
        elseif Egg <= 485 then
            print("Rare")
        elseif Egg <= 585 then
            print("Uncommon")
        elseif Egg <= 700 then
            print("Common!")
        elseif Egg == 800 then
            print("You're a Bum.")
        end
    end
end)```
this one prints everytime a part of your body touches

[fluid zodiac]

** You are now Level 1! **

[deft dirge]

i can edit it so you need to touch once for infinite replies

its just changing how u get humanoid

removed loop

[thick mirage]

so what was the error?

[deft dirge]

and getting value of 5

[thick mirage]

just the loop?

[deft dirge]

yeah

[thick mirage]

why did u add

if not Humanoid then return end

i thought when u introduce it

[deft dirge]

if humanoid is not found then dont do anything

[thick mirage]

its always going to be true

ohhh

[thick mirage]

i thought thats what waitforchild is

[deft dirge]

wait for child pauses the script until humanoid is found

[stray drum]

yeah

[thick mirage]

alr thanks

[stray drum]

it’s also unnecessary resource usage

[thick mirage]

wym

[deft dirge]

the humanoid is there to detect if its a character

if not game.Players:GetPlayerFromCharacter(otherPart.Parent) then return end
also works

[stray drum]

yooo thats tuff

[thick mirage]

what does return do

[fluid zodiac]

** You are now Level 2! **

[thick mirage]

@deft dirge

[deft dirge]

Return replies a value in function and keeping it empty stops the code
just like how break stops a loop

[thick mirage]

ion get it bru

[deft dirge]

Basically ends the code there

Or ```local function hi()
return "hi"
end

Hello = hi()

This will make Hello be "hi"

[vague pine]

Return can makes you "escape" the function, so you tell the code of the function to stop where u put return, return could also be used to return us values, what do i mean by thats, is that if we make a function

local function addition(number1,number2)
  local number3 = number1 + number2
  return number3
end

local result = addition(5,2) -- result = 7 since number 3 with this function is 7, and we said the function that it will be equal to number3 
--another ewample
local otherResult = addition(3,2) -- 5 since here number3 is equal to 5

And if u still dont understand dont worry, if we keep saying the same thing, a time will come u will understand immediatly