#💬 yuri._2007ʹs Feedback

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urban oakBOT
cunning badger
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everything here collides

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there is 0 sense of allignment, and the iv drip carriers have no iv on them

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if ur throwing papers on the ground make it seem more abandoned/lived in

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and the ceiling texture is buns

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also, those look like tiles that have been stuck ONTO the ceiling, which if you think of it, just looks dumb

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ceiling tiles usually have the holders/lines over the tile, rather than under

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lighting is nice, makes it feel sterile but the doors in the back could use work

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the colors are iffy, since your walls are tinged yellow, and ik where u got the idea, since hsopitals have walls like that, but then the ceiling is darker and whiter

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in your focal point, the ring, there is pretty much not anything

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its empty and feels out of place, add like chairs, scattered papers, piles of unfinished work, computers

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the doors are also pretty weird if you ask me, they stand out too mcuch

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also the place where the doors are just loses the wall stripes for some reason

little imp
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eyo

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@cunning badger

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I couldn't read yo text

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cause I js got back, but I did some changes

cunning badger
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now THAT looks good

little imp
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fixed the lighting n added a stool, a lil shelf, paperworks, a mug

cunning badger
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i like it much more

little imp
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thank you RRRAAAAHHHH

cunning badger
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u could just change the ceiling and add computers

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but this is STERILE now

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it looks like an actual hospital

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well done

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nice

little imp
little imp
cunning badger
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Ts might be fire