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acoustic currentBOT
strange phoenix
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Poses could use some work

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Katana shouldn't curl towards the body, the body should curl towards the katana

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This makes it seem like all the weight is in the torso, when in fact it is all in the katana, the katana should be carrying the body and swinging it round to where the katana wants to end up (more outstretched), but instead the torso is curling the katana inwards

proven lily
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thx for advice man, i will fix that when if i make it again!