In need of vocals / feedback needed!

[uncut nacelle]

Hello camelliacord! I am working on a song that stemmed from me messing around on my piano, and I am looking for breathy vocals that would fit what I have going on. I can provide an example aswell!

Also, feedback is much needed since I really want to polish this track as much as possible! Please note that it is a WIP track so it's not completely finish. feel free to be as harsh as you want, any and all criticism is excellent to have, especially when are as new to producing as I am (around 6 months now)

I described the vocals that I need wrong

https://youtu.be/iwfui1__Ceo?t=22

kinda the style of where it says "it was a force of nature" etc

stuffs like that

no clue how to process them like that

[buoyant knoll]

Breathy vocals can be very easily made with serum fx hyper dimension with the detune all the way up (istg this makes all vocals sound breathy no matter what).

And as for feedback, make the drums punch through more. Can be done through upping the volume, adding sidechain to literally all the other instruments, or both.