#pretty much finished song, opinions?

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gusty lodge
leaden river
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the structure is there

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it's just that the transitions are really rough

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i especially like 1:46

gusty lodge
summer sun
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0:12 where the synth kicks in feels really off to me

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like there seems to be two parts - synth and claps

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and the synth is pretty wide, but is sidechained to the claps which are completely mono so it switches between completely mono and very wide

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not sure if that is what's causing it but that is my idea

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also things like the schranz and psytrance parts are just in themselves very mono

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which you should fix maybe

gusty lodge
gusty lodge
summer sun
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Maybe I'm remembering wrong

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But I know the schranz part is and I remember the psytrance one being the same

summer sun
leaden river
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yeah i'm relistening to it now with BOTH earphones on

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this track has weird stereo fields

summer sun
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You don't have to sidechain when the frequencies don't clash

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That's really only a kick thing

summer sun
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Thanks for confirming

leaden river
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the psytrance click is weird

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it's like stereo on high but mono on mid

summer sun
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Yeah it's strange. I'm not sure how you get it like that

leaden river
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i don't know what kinda stereo imaging program was used here but Its very similar to how Fl mobile's stereoizer controls which of the frequencies should have stereo and otherwise

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i really like the hi-tech/techcore part which is like the weirdly correctly stereoized part of the track

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I'll try running the entire thing in a stereoizer/stereo imager

leaden river
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but i don't think this did the psybass any justice

summer sun
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Not the best method

leaden river
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i put the stereo on the whole thing

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the stereoizer won't fucking stop massacring the highs

gusty lodge
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anyways i fixed some stuff and i'm rendering the track rn

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i layered 5000 claps on top of the original one and added a stereo imager

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in the hitech part i changed some stuff idk i like it more now

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in the schranz part i changed the 303 and made it more stereo

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and in the psytrance part i don't even know what i did

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(also new spooky part)

summer sun
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sounds much better now

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synth part in the beginning still sounds pretty odd but yeah idk how to fix that

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also I would say the melody + chords sound a bit cheesy but that is something that you will get better at as you make more and more melodies

leaden river
gusty lodge