#honkai-fan-art
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Sasuga sauce master @maiden breach
A couple of days ago I said I would have posted some stories
Don't remember who liked the idea
@true grove 
Ok no one cares😅😂
@rustic stream
@red dust ur story is quite good
Suprisingly the English worked well out
if not a few spelling mistakes, but i forgive you
Thanks
@red dust Gonna read through it but one thing I'd suggest is looking at breaking the paragraphs up a bit. It's... A little hard to read.
so it's about your oc huh? neat idea
also yeah I'm with Ice Queen, quite hard to read
I had just created the character, so I thought why not?

Just reading through the intro I do think you can improve the flow a bit but your writing is solid. You're doing a good job of setting the scene up.
It should get a bit smoother after the intro
yes, a lot of descriptions for the intro
Usually I do an intro to take the reader into the atmosphere. In italian it's easier to make it flowing
Writing with a language you're not 100% familiar with can be a little awkward, yeah
Especially since so much of writing is knowing when you break the rules of grammar
Like. Dialogue in particular.
I am familiar with english, I never used my writing style with it
Cause children don't know english too well
^
Mm, well, I'll keep reading. The biggest thing is just breaking up the large paragraphs a bit so it flows a bit better.
Like I said the writing is really solid and you have a good groundwork.
It just needs some editing.
Like shorter sentences?
i used to grow up basically the only one who knew english quite well
kinda awkward
Like shorter sentences?
Not really, but a lot more subtler
@red dust More along the lines of finding where you're moving onto the next idea... It's... It's hard to explain
Ah understood
It's just too much text without any spacing which makes it very difficult to read
It's a bit intricate
So you need to go through and find the break points where you can separate them into separate paragraphs.
Which may require some reworking.
for me it's too over-explained, which takes out some magic of interpreting it in your own way
also knowing where the break up sentences is hard, so do practice on that
Do you know Hardy? I follow a similar principle: the photographic writing
Not familiar off the top of my head actually
Ask @wary plover or @heady quarry
I admit my writing style is like a root

Professional writers
i dont know photographic writing, but i got the premise from the word
its hard to explain what i know and dont
Hm
@red dust I see you are a man of fanfics aswell
@minor violet yeah
Do you want to see mine?
There are a good few authors on here actually
I'm neck deep in my own at the moment. Should actually work on it again soon.
I started a novel, but not in english
@golden skiff arigatou

@red dust what do you think bout my fanfic
I'd like to know how many words I wrote
copy it all and put it all on ms word lol
@minor violet you can't judge a dinner if you eat just the starter
I mean I want to see more
I dont get it
dont judge a book by its cover
Oh it's still I progress
this man here be lookin for 69, he has his priorities straight lmao
Anyway, what about the fight between Zephyr and Ullr?
Ullr?
It's a character of my story
because of a vid game, i know Ullr is a myth of some ice god or something
Mhm
@sharp lava son of Thor, in this case it's the name of an honkai beast
maestro made a giant ice honkai beast named ullr
Dud
Nope, elementless
@minor violet nope, I decided HoT would have been too op, so I changed it
Originally, my character should have been a sealed herrscher of Time
I know that would be so, that's why I'm going to make changes about that
Time travel is too op
Anyway, would you give me an opinion about the fight ecc? @minor violet
@red dust umm, more boom?
?
Read this
Ok
Please 
It's good
There are a couple of references to nordic gods
Ya know, valks ecc
Needa research deeply
Hm
@minor violet do ya like it?
Yep
Where did ya arrive?
Ragnarok is happening
And winter is coming
@verbal field @minor violet
So, what about the fight ecc?
Amazing
Cool
Maybe I should have made longer flashbacks
@rustic stream that is damn perfect
Omg marry me

@heady quarry can I ask your opinion too?
huh, did my question get deleted
@gusty jolt maybe
can't find it
anyway, was asking if a new S rank Mei is coming, if so, anyone got image references that I can gather for later fan art
probably HoT
@red dust on what ?
@heady quarry I posted a fanmade story
I never make this again when I Finish this
what... what are you trying to achieve with this
A Sirin shaped cake
@flat fossil good luck
@flat fossil now that’s a queen cake

Hmmm that artist @rustic stream I needa do some collab with him sometimes later
Ye?
We known each other for almost years already
This confuse me
This is my next installments of my HI3 fan made AU
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lets see
So what do you guys think bout my fan made herrschers?
Can anyone make those Abby memes with HI3 characters
So what do you guys think bout my fan made herrschers?
@minor violet im reading it, in 10ish min ill tell you
nah but engrish comprehension isnt my forte
Oh ok
so
basically the HoT is the most broken character ever made
with a kiana/sirin behavior
the HoTC is an interesting creation but i think is quite limited with her/his powers
the power the host bears is like the herrscher of plague but upgraded
we need a Herrscher of Cuddles, I tell ya!
we need a Herrscher of Cuddles, I tell ya!
Yeah, where is Bella?
We need fluffy bella as herrscher of cuddles
Bella, the dragon herrscher
now this I gotta see
Huh, well good to know
with a kiana/sirin behavior
@crude jolt technically but herrscher of time is more on the kiana side than the sirin side
@minor violet remember, time is the most difficult power to set. If you make it too weak it's useless, if you make it too powerful it's godly
That's why I limited HOT with 1 hour max
I'm going to set up that she's currently can control time for 15 seconds
I prefer an other idea of Time
Like what
Time is nothing but a ravaging river. We are just moveless rocks on its bed. We feel the current and we can do nothing. An herrscher of time would be like a fish, able to move itself, and maybe other things, through the current. Travelling against it, swimming with it, you know
There is no proper time travel, it would be a paradox
Time travel would be too broken
Not exactly
She can change major events
And turned the tides
I think having the ability of the world, killer queen bites the dust and King crimson is the best ability for herrscher of time
Changing major events is too op
Time is a succession of phases
An herrscher of time would be able to skip some phases, or return to previous ones, but time itself should not be bent
Well that just bites the dust and King crimson'a abilities on steroids
Anyway I'd like to see a fair fight between Time and Energy
How would an herrscher fight against an herrscher able to control and turn into nothing the Honkai energy?
I forgot already
I sometime can be a bit forgetful
Sorry
Ok now im going to re read your fanfic
To be honest
I thought about some reworks to Hotime
If the amount of time she can stop is limited to the honkai energy she has inside her
You could do that the max amount of time she can stop is up to 15 seconds in her normal state
Also the herrscher of tech could be more invasive
Hmm that is good
But 10 seconds is good cuz jojo refrence
And what do you mean by be more invasive
And 1 hour is good enough for a already broken herrscher to have, if more that just becomes more broken
I finish the cake... It looks like from Siegfried ... but I tried my best and did it with love...
Happy Birthday my Queen


I know

You have something to say @coarse drift
Don't be shy
Say something
Fucking auto correct
Agree
Yay!
Eyy
still unknow
And what do you mean by be more invasive
@minor violet for example she could invade the others herrschers core
and end in a epic battle between Hotime and Hotech
They already have rogue one herrscher they don't need another
@minor violet did ya understand a bit?
?
btw
Herrscher of Energy powers
does already exist a herrscher of space?
@crude jolt nope
i mean being able of manipulate the space and time itself
But herrschers already bend a bit the space
for example opening a gate to sea of quanta out of thin air
Isnt there already a herrscher for that?
No
maybe HoV
No herrscher of space
depends on the context
No, HOV creates an other dimension
but i guess its possible
An herrscher of space should be able to manipulate lenght ecc
Like 1 meter becomes 100 and vice versa
yep
But that's it
actually i could create a lore about it
Cool and powerful, but lacks of variety
also controlling the vectors and the matter itself wouldnt fit in the space theme?
Or maybe bending space in the sense of literally curving it
Like a black hole
@crude jolt no
thats HoV territory i think
yes it is
And where?
This channel shoud be called fan fiction, not fan art
You can do crazy shit with that
thats a possibility
it does fit in the fan art category tho
where do you suggest mr?
Ask a mod
Maybe general or lore
It's Ms @crude jolt
#🇩🇪off-topic maybe
Yeah
it does explicitly say feel free to talk about fan stories
@crude jolt where?
@ashen coral sorry but wouldn't it be better if the channel was honkai fan fiction? We already got honkai gallery with just pics
talk using images
Realy
that wouldnt count as a meme?

we already have too many channels
I didn't say add a channel
and it depends on the amount of people who want that anyway
Is it possible to make a pool on discord?
art gallery is for promotion
There are not just fanarts. I mean lots of guys draw badly but create interesting things
thats quite controversial tbh
i will talk with the other mods and see anyway, keep it mostly art related for now
i will talk with the other mods and see anyway, keep it mostly art related for now
understood
Sirin: Look Captain I've created a black hole
Anyway the second pic she is using the Gate of Babilon
That's my bravely Bella
I want valkyrie Bella like this
its like fu hua but with moonlight beam
But it's a start
the elf is quite good too
@flat fossil she needs scale-like armor, but I think she would be a hand to hand fighter
What about the ulti being a burst where she summons a giant dragon avatar made of lightnings?
that could be the other gauntlet user
More like claw user
What about a valk that does not need a weapon but something else?
🍪
Hmm
Guys someone cheer me up , I'm sad
Ur pretty good looking
I'm dad

My logic
Irl I do tons of cool things like iaido, biking, gym, stay with my gf ecc
I am sad because I can't get the best waifu
I'm fat
@heady quarry
Fabulous
And
Terrific
I want the best waifu
I wan to become le HoT
All I eva wanted
It has sword
It looks like edgy demon
Ara ara pretty much
Dragon
Lightning
She's broken ( for now)
do not give up, just save crystals and wait for the next time
@bitter yoke I guess she sparks your interest

ba dum tss
Is there a wallpaper quality pic of that image of kongming on the thrown from the event?
game assets, even for pc version, are at 720 p, so i think that's the one you can get if you get it from game files
where would you find it?
installation folder\Honkai Impact 3rd\Games\BH3_Data\StreamingAssets\Video
@bright fossil F2P
watch out for spoilers tho, since upcoming CG are there as well @polar adder
all im finding are looks like vid clips. pretty much anything in here is likely a spoiler since storywise im still in chapter 3
ah yes, best to avoid those,
all the scenes you see in game are video clips
the one you are looking for is called '4.0_Activity_LOOP_CG03_1_mux_F9C3E40D98CBCE42'
Yeah thats the one but since it aint an image, it doesnt look like i can use it as a background
thanks for your help finding it at least
true thx again
same enery.
Yeah
Different outfits
Same energy
Different worlds
Warudos*
I only upload thicc art

Love Mei but Kiana x Fu Hua > Kiana x Mei
Idk if fu hua ever consider tuna as a love interest
Mei is the only one who have a love interest to kiana
It’s just a fantasy, but yea who else would for any other reason Mei has?
Will this do?
THANK YOU, @rotund mango
Aite anytime~ 👍
Delicious
@stark salmon low quality :(
That
Is just
Perfection
i have a new wallpaper now
Yeah that's cool
thats awesome
@old knot how do you guys get those wallpapers to move like that on your desktop? 😮
Wallpaper engine
Any that you would recommend?
Yep


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I made 6 expressions for her 
Does anybody know when will the first episode of cooking with valkyries s2 will launch ?
You sure you nose is going to Nose Bleed Overdirve
Your nose is just became as powerful as a Geyser
🤯
?
Huh
Btw it's her birthday today
😄
Yesterday
.-.
Was her
No
Birthday

Yesterday
My b-day was 3 days ago

No u
My bday was 3 days ago too EFF
silence
10 day‘s after Himeko

@bitter yoke yesterday
Someone got the animated wallpaper of starlit astrologos? I want that on phone but they all have scripts and stuff
i'd want a taste of Roza and Liliya's there
@sharp lava 
I cri cuz I cant do art well
dont lower yourself like that
Me2 my friend
art can be done by anyone
That's why I stick with text
If u practice you'll get good
writing is also art
Yep
Food too! Like cookies :3
Food

Cannibal

That just cannibalism with extra step
i see someone isn't in good mood huh

seems Theresa has already given up but kiana is still struggling to save her

Interpret that with caution
sirin not liek
Guys do you know that kind of moments when your happyness depends on the flip of a coin?
yes

the moment i realized himeko was actually dying
Saved
That moment when I understand I will be able to earn just 14000 crystals for HoT release and I have 50/50 chance to get best waifu Mei
More than one month and I'm already out of control
Higo would be the best plushie
agreed
@small steeple wat is ur next drawing ?
Not sure
I do commissions atm so i don't have much time for honkai fanart

lol
Maybe HoT or new Bella
Thats gay af





Well...
where do you got those emotes tho?
Other server
oh ok
ja
Nice
u2?
lol


Here #honkai-talk
Hybrid doesn't have the de role yet
@flat fossil I’m here
Hello

sirin. ich glaube es war keine gute idee mich mit der andere Bella bekannt zu machen
...

he is speaking the language of gods
Ich werde nicht als Top Bella ersetzt
Oi pass auf ... Ah egal bist ja schon restricted
Some old good art ... Not mine btw
Not that i knew ... Maybe in some events, but in story for e.g. its not rlly the case (beat me if i'm wrong)
U will probably see more of this ... When its abt shipping with rita

FBI OPEN UP
definetly the correct ship
F fbi
Oh my roza waifu looking pretty as always
NICO NICO NIIIIII
Nice fu hua !
That azure empirea is lit m8
AE looks amazing
Thanks so much!
Pinkie powa
awww, cute
cute lizards
I know it's not a fan art
But does anyone have the Starlit Astrologos/Lone Stargazer gif ?
Where SA is holding a lantern
i have the wallpaper if u'd like that
i dont have the gif version unfortunately
Argh :C
@royal yew lend me the pic version
Cute
Thank you @royal yew
np
Muh queen
What's with that bust size
if its one thing ive learned, its that even miHoYo is inconsistent with that
Lel
noice
Hahaha u're right but I don't give a fk because it looks damn hot 
That one Sirin is really mesmerizing
otto here be looking like the final boss in a christian pokemon game
More like a final boss in darksouls game
More like a dude who is gonna get killed by a sniper
Otto would never be worthy to be a boss in a dark souls game
Hm
How many hm's have you written til now?
@golden skiff do you know artist of your pfp, I remember they did a durandal one as well
i remember the Durandal art but I found it randomly, so I dont have the artist sadly.



veliona proceeds to pleasure with tuna
Tuna is now a dullaha
@small steeple 608
Holy
Hm
you counted it?
Madlad

What's wrong with it
Wth


thats a lot of hms
Holy sh
People are full of suprises huh?
610 now
Hm
0
Legendary ^

@old knot yes thanks
taking the hand of himeko is a great honor
and so much so because she's kinda not here


poor Bella
smol
im still mad because of that
We get a spoiler
Good idea
agreed
I don't need a rage Again...
...
Wholesome
@flat fossil Imma sad too, gonna using crystals for HoV ADV supply instead of saving for hol. Now I just hate the character
Im also thinking about it
I buy only the stigs and Bella-Elf
@heady quarry Thanks as always. 🙏 
Wait what happened @rotund flint why wont u save for HoT/HoL anymore
Is there sonething wrong wt her
In game lore, I spoiled myself next chapter thanks to honkai3rdguy
I normally don't bash characters, but between her appearence and behavior I'm tilted af
Yes
i don't save them though, just appreciate to see more sakura/teri arts.

Same
Hm
Hm
i don't save them though, just appreciate to see more sakura/teri arts.
@bitter yoke you'll get more then, i'm happy there's at least 1 sakura lover here

I'm also a sakura lover

What ya want yoku
Hm
I want reclamation
Of what?
Honkai shall win
I dont speak rice
Spoiler
And thats a spoiler
U better delet that
@minor violet don't say that if u talk with a Chinese
Oh
Yeah same
@heady quarry lol its what is given to me
I didnt choose this life, but it chose me
-Ezio Auditore da Firenze
Hm.
So he doesn't want to yeet himself from a tower but the towers want him to yeet?
She so coool
@icy palm hey
14,8 mb
Do u know what u just post?
Pog
@verbal field thanks for the pic
Nah
I give u the sauce
Lol ok I'll take it anyways
Thank you, sir
Beautiful as always

Now post Fu hua art for me
No
.
Fine.
Obviously
Just some i already posted and my own
Bella?
She's not important so no
Here take my latest fu hua art
That's ur pfp but k
Bella is not a bird she can turn into a dragon
Her face is judging my very soul
Yeah.. ik
@verbal field
Sele secretly stole this art
Wud?
Nah nvm
Yooo that's amazing
@bitter yoke just a screenshot
Yae bout to end higo's reign of babling


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