Using Rhythm 1

[sonic edge]

I HATE BOTH OF THE SONGS 😭

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[sonic edge]

Im sorry these songs are both just noise i cannot create with 💔

[sonic edge]

:)

how long do i have to wait lol

[sonic edge]

q

[tiny lynx]

@placid ledge

[placid ledge]

Ok I haven’t done this exercise yet (because I also don’t like either of the songs)

But I think a few parts don’t represent the song

Like the last ship part?

[tiny lynx]

wait you didnt? its in your completed list lol

which is why i pinged

[placid ledge]

Oh wait it’s 1

Not 2

Oh yeah I did like lazy ass gameplay for this one

Yeah idk sorry

[tiny lynx]

alr

[tiny lynx]

two main issues here:

• a lot of the gamemode changes are offsync or off-beat. even when they do sync theyre like a beat delayed, instead of occurring at meaningful points. i suggest you limit yourself to like, 4 gamemode changes max.
• the way you represent the notes is also not consistent; for instance, at one point you use spider clicks (sharp, straight lines) to represent the snares in the song, but then you switch that up and never use it again - this exercise is about keeping things like that consistent