improving a level

[smoky forge]

The 2-3 biggest issues are that 1. Its not city themed 2. Theres nothing about the name that matches the deco or gp 3. Its too hard for a four minute level.

I would improve it by making the dark theme go to a heliopolis type theme where theres city lights in the background and the name gets changed to something city related.

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[humble grotto]

just write 2 sentences for each point

a little more

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[smoky forge]

Its not city themed instead its just dark and gives vibes to the starting of the level I CANT FIX YOU by JAMHD
Theres lit nothing about the name : Fracture, That matches the gp and deco fracture should be like a glass theme instead this is a industrial theme

I owuld improve it by making the theme be more like heliopolis with city buildings and lights and roads and cars all sorts of that stuff int he background it would be the dark of night and there would be ambient sounds and every minute it gets closer to daylight and as soon as its daylight the level finishes

how abt this @humble grotto

[humble grotto]

-ex pass