#Improving a Level

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plush socket
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  1. the color scheme is very bland. ik the level is supposed to be monochrome but everything just feels as if you just put a greyscale filter over it, which works, but doesn't make for good deco.

  2. the name "fractured" doesn't really work, as everything seems too put together, and the creators idea was the 'starting' of a city (doesn't really work does it?)

  3. the level is also laking any type of air deco, and the block deco they do have is very lackluster, and could be improved by just using more colors, which i somewhat addressed in point number 1. the pulsing effect is also very hard on the eyes

  4. To fix issue number 1, I would simply just add more colors to the color group and make the level seem more "monochrome" instead of just a filter look

  5. Simply changing the name to something like "City of Grey" or "Monochrome City" would work better than fractured

  6. adding stuff like air lines when your flying or adding more depth to the block can help improve the deco, and removing the pulsing effect might be better for the eyes long term

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