Improving a Level

[glad bear]

Issues:

1. Too dark
2. I don't see the city theme that the creator was aiming for
3. Not enough monochrome
   Solutions:
4. Use less fog and darkness
5. Put structures that represent the city
6. Add more monochrome

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[chilly anchor]

Why is being dark bad, please explain more as well as how you would fix it

Also what do you mean by not enough monochrome

And how do “add” monochrome

[glad bear]

it's too dark in the first part

[chilly anchor]

It’s also very short, you should write at least 1-2 full sentences on each point on why it’s bad

[glad bear]

In the cube part the monochrome wasn't used on portals

[chilly anchor]

That isn’t a bad thing, that’s just so you can sightread which portal it is ???????

Yeah sorry

-ex nw