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The city theme isn't portrayed clearly, looking at it it stands as a typical design level lacking the right details that will point it to a city theme.
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Some details like the transparent blocks, the deco for the background and the arrows are unnecessary. I included this as a significant issue because they are blocking room and potential for details and elements that would fit the theme more, providing a solution to the first issue.
Solution : Since both issues are connected, we can substitute the unnecessary details with city themed elements such as street lights, electrical towers, wires, trains and buildings or any city infrastructure masked as silhouettes to maintain the mood of the segment. I'm not saying that all of these should be added, they are simply options to choose from in order to achieve the targeted theme.