steel fjord
The biggest issues in this level is the uninteresting repetitive gameplay, how it starts off with a ship that just goes up/down in a tight corridor. And the immediate transition into a much lighter and abrupt cube section, as the vision was a transition from monochrome into a city.
To fix the gameplay I would add some deviation maybe a couple orb clicks, and a short straight fly. This will be done just so the gameplay doesn’t feel as generic and stale, especially for a four minute level.
The next section in my opinion is too much of an abrupt change from the dimly lit ship, as its a four minute level that creates a city from monochrome. I would think more subtle changes would have to be made. I would suggest having the ship section be slower, and the transition into the cube be more natural, as it feels sort of disjunct from the previous section.
marble thunder
narrow bloom
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