#Improving a level

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uneven hare
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  1. what was described was that the level is supposed to be a city style level, however I do not see buildings anywhere in the background and the block design does KIND OF resemble some buildings but I would make it clearer just so the player understands that it's supposed to be buildings (assuming that this is finished deco)

fix for 1: i would add some buildings into the background, and make the block design look more like buildings

  1. this is optional since not every level needs to be based exactly on what it's name is, but I thought that since the level's name was fractured that it'd be more fitting to make the block design a little more "broken" (again assuming that this is finished deco)

fix for 2: i would probably add some shards flying in the background or make the block design a little more disconnected to give it that broken feel.

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