#Improving A Level

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split pine
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Problems

  1. Many spikes in the first part blends with the block/glow which is bad cause they should see where the spike is to not die

2.I think the second part does not give off a city vibe, and i think its kinda empty

Solutions

  1. I think to make it not blend with the block is to change the colour of the spike or remove some of the glow on the spike

  2. Add some details/decorations to not make it feel empty

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fallow leaf
split pine
austere oak
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@fallow leaf will you grade this or should I ?

fallow leaf
split pine
fallow leaf
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yeh thats what i was looking for

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