tough yew
1: The decoration didn't really fit the "city" theme, no parts of windows, balconies, doors, anything a normal building would have. it was more like inside a factory, or like robot parts. Another problem is that there was also colors to the portals & orbs
2: making the objects look like buildings would help a ton because you would want the player to know their surroundings is in a city. Removing the portals/orbs color and adding in a clear detail of what type of object they are would definitely help, considering its supposed to be "monochrome"
3: i think these issues overlap. Although one is about the design, but the other is about the color, redesigning the buildings could also require recoloring some objects, meaning that coloring the orbs/portals could be in the process of designing the buildings
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