#need feedback on a bit of my layout.

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ripe trail
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Soo, there ARE some flaws in the layout, but if it's your first creation, it's good.
The layout in general is easy, with a couple of jumps here and there with also a skip -- which is bad -- on the 3rd platform, the ball part could be improved alongside the cube part, and the 2nd cube part could also get reworked, considering there's a blind jump while the arrow trigger rotates.
the jumps are mostly offsync to the music too.
But don't worry, we all start somewhere, and we all improve!

ripe trail
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i recommend making them more far instead of closer

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so that people have time to react to the jump