#Well I am Making my Proper Platformer Level(robtop Styled (trying my first rate worthy level) )

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wheat stone
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I Have This Level It's Unlisted i want someone to playtest it it's still under work tho But If Your Willing To Give Me FeedBack On It Id Like To (I Want Feedback on deco And On Gameplay And how to improve it (if you can ) )

Id:113729770

Take A Vid With You

Level Name: The Red Hollow Beta

Username: Wiytcher

diff: 4-5 stars (hard)

Desc: If You find any bugs in the gameplay or the deco layering makesure to say please this level is still a beta it's still underwork i am rightnow making the final part's gameplay the level is barely long like 1.25 secounds and i am still gonna update on it until it's good If Your Willing To Give Me FeedBack On It Id Like To (I Want Feedback on deco And On Gameplay and improving it in art ( if you want ) ) make sure to send a reccording and thanks for playtesting this level

Other: suggest new level's name if u want in the comments or here and i upload daily on the feedback tab so if you want to help this level add ideas here or in the feedback replying to me and tahnks for helping this upcoming rate worthy level (maybe) you could get ideas for the backgrounds i really like the defualt one i choose looks really good and btw this is for the secound tower list i am making right i making 3 other levels if you want to playtest them ask for the idea (still wroking in this one rightnow )

Honerable Mention: ReckMyStar, Igor, VoidChimok And Many Others (They Helped my deco and some gameplay And polish

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grave ginkgo
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I think with some improvement this level has potential. I feel like it could be cool concept if the bridge collapse like quick sand after you run over it. Feel like the spike are two unnoticeable maybe change the color so you can tell danger and it doesn’t blend in with the background. Their a part where I can see past the black background. Maybe while you’re playing the level the background can flicker to make things less static. I believe adding an area tint trigger could help as if you set black it could like a shadow as walk across it. Maybe you can have the chains moving up and down slowly in the background. Some of the spikes are layer above the ground/ceiling. I feel like it be cool when the guy leaves this place you have lens circle around the guy to pull the viewer attention on him.

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Sorry for kepting you waiting

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Darken the background and even add like an gradient trigger for glow if you want

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north charm
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@keen zodiac sup

keen zodiac
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id doesn't work for me

north charm
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@wheat stone sup

wheat stone
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here is the id maybe its diffrent idk

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113792283

keen zodiac
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now it works

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wait

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the level is wrong

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it's red cave

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not Take A Vid With You

wheat stone
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i changed the name form the red hollow to the red cave

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sry for not saying that before

keen zodiac
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so the level is "Red Cave" not "Take A Vid With You"?

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oh

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oops

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i cant read appearently

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completly blinded the level name in the post

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brb with the recording

wheat stone
keen zodiac
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