#w4ffl5 stuff

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polar breach
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ch1 so far plus full notes

sly flume
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Really easy to read! As in it was written well so it flowed nicely. I liked the characterisations too, and chapter 1 has a pretty good hook :) I haven't read the notes for the next chapter because I don't want to learn about it outside of your writing

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From the limited experience I've had writing, dialogue is so hard to get right but you nailed it imo

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Are you happy with chapter 1?