#avatar-ideas

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shadow nexus
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Ah...right...

somber bronze
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@burnt apex AYAYASip i wish i could jump in rn but i canttt

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@shadow nexus the shading for the hair is alright just make the lines a bit darker and thicker owoPaw

shadow nexus
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Uhhh

burnt apex
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you could maybe just make them thicker around the root and thinner at the end

shadow nexus
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Hmm

hazy falcon
shadow nexus
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Neat! Going to considerate it.

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Also

hazy falcon
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That's basically the "wwo style" with shading

shadow nexus
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You're "bad" at drawing on mobile?

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It's pretty good

quick harbor
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hi

shadow nexus
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Hi

hazy falcon
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Uhm ye I'm better on pc

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Btw

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Which back item?

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I will change the first one in color and make less of them

burnt apex
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oooooohh second one is really cool

hazy falcon
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Still need hair

quick harbor
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Lemme know if we r doin a gravestone so i can start

somber bronze
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@hazy falcon reee i just- nvm 1_BlobAngery

hazy falcon
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@quick harbor I need hair!

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@somber bronze Wut? I know but I want other options toooooo because idk but I like first more xD

somber bronze
hazy falcon
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Don't flex reee

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Not my type of shading tho

somber bronze
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I dont flex mSip

quick harbor
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@hazy falcon I told u i dont know how to do hair but i can do graveee

hazy falcon
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I need a hairstyle, which fits with the shi glasses

quick harbor
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Oof

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Fine we can delete it

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🤷

hazy falcon
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Nooooo

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That's the base of the outfit xD I mean just, that it is annoying to find a hairstyle xD

quick harbor
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Betrayal skill lvl 100

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I can just submit the solo one i made tho

burnt apex
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maybe an undercut or a half shave would look good

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i should've used another color rather than orange,,,

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hair is still behind the back and the lips have to cover the default mouth

quick harbor
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Looks cool i wanna suggest a chnage tho

burnt apex
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also are you going to draw eyebrows?

quick harbor
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The shields look kinda bare

shadow nexus
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At least.

honest mural
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İt's not The best i know

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But how cares😌

atomic hearth
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Not trying to be rude, but the eye doesnt look like you drew that yourself

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why is the mask transparant? and the hair cant go around the neck like that

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You might wanna check out the pinned messages, for a nice clean avatar template and some do's and dont ^^

honest mural
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@atomic hearth thanks and yes i have the eye on Google

atomic hearth
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@honest mural Im srry but everything needs too be drawn by you, you cant copy things from google

honest mural
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Oh i dont know that.
Thanks😅 cute_heart

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(つ≧▽≦)つ

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Good night

opaque wyvern
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@quick harbor okay

woeful rock
iron fox
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that's so cutee

iron fox
quick harbor
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@woeful rock did you draw everything yourself?
The eyes on the hood have outline and it looks like the eyes from the person aswell though I can’t see it clearly.
Gradients aren’t allowed.
The eye highlights are mirrored which I prefer them not to be. And maybe try to mover the tongue more in the middle.

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@iron fox good start!
Only outlines aren’t allowed and maybe try to maybe make the hair more fluffy. Because right now its a little flat on the head

iron fox
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thanks

hazy falcon
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@woeful rock heyo you 0w0thats so cute xD it reminds me of a Pokémon.

The problem for me is, that the eyes have outlines ;-; these are not allowed and you have to remove them. Maybe you can make the eyes.... Cuter? They look kinda cold. You could add a pupil maybe. And big highlights make things cuter too xD
I don't really understand the shading on the right site of the hood ^^' it looks wrong placed.
You need some shading on the ears too, because it looks flat. The stars are weird there....
The darker pink part is also weird.... Why did you make it like this?
My opinion to the shirt is, that it doesn't fit with the hood thing. There are outlines and it looks kinda flat...
The mouth is okay and the eyes too, but the eyes have mirrors highlights.
Can I have a picture without hood?

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gradient in the hair too

woeful rock
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I drew myself

hazy falcon
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Why did you remove the details in the eyes?

woeful rock
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I'm afraid there will be problems with color gradation again.

woeful rock
iron fox
hazy falcon
iron fox
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oh

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what does that mean? do i have to redo it or?

hazy falcon
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Nonono

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I meant the part on the right
And that my gallerie drawings are bad

iron fox
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oh lol

hazy falcon
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The eyes are too big hmm you can make them smaller and for the mouth you could maybe use another smile 0w0

iron fox
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alright

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i honestly dont know what to do for the mask lol

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maybe ill just remove the mouth

hazy falcon
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Hmmmm

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You can try whatever you want 0w0

spring mauve
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submissions have to be svg, right?👀

hazy falcon
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Best case yes ^^ you can ask someone to trace it or..... @quick harbor idk much about formatting because I work with Vektor xD

spring mauve
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okayy, ty :>

quick harbor
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Im pinged?

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I don’t understand 😂

hazy falcon
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Yes yes... You don't work in vector ^^

quick harbor
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Thats right!

somber bronze
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Submissions don't need to be in vector until they are really wanted in gameowoPaw

hazy falcon
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I said best case

somber bronze
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Philipp will then ask any tracer of his choice if he wants to trace it if it isnt svg already

But you can always trace it/let it get traced by a tracer whenever you want to owoPaw
There isn't any other way than tracing sadly cz_cry

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Converting from png to svg isnt possible rip

iron fox
hazy falcon
iron fox
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idk how i should shade it though.

honest mural
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I make it 100% self

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What is better?

reef karma
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@honest mural gradient isn't allowed 😅

somber bronze
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@iron fox what exactly?
The hair or the fur? owoPaw
If you want to i could try to show you how i would shade it cz_3d_hearts

rotund elm
honest mural
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@reef karma oh realy. Oh man 😪 🤣

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Thanks

hazy falcon
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@rotund elm you just changed the color with another layer

rotund elm
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Jes but i like it

honest mural
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xD

quick harbor
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@rustic holly Pumpkin boy 🎃 👻

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By Pumpkin (lel)

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@hazy falcon

hazy falcon
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Hey 0w0 is it the last version?

quick harbor
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Yeah ^^

hazy falcon
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Okay! I will ask othersalpacauwu

quick harbor
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Thank youhappycat

woeful rock
quick harbor
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Would that line around the eye of the hat be an outline?

hazy falcon
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I won't give feedback to it, because it gets ignored ^^'

winter falcon
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That seems great outfit

hazy falcon
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And yes ghost. Already said it tho

fair steeple
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@woeful rock wowww

gilded trench
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@woeful rock OMG!! That so cute! I love it😍 😍 😍

somber bronze
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Well if atleast the outline thingy doesnt get fixed i dont think it can get into vote bc no outlines is just one of the basic rules mSip

woeful rock
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@gilded trench Thank you very much. I also like your design very much.💕

atomic hearth
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@woeful rock I think you should change the colour of the earring/stars on the female outfit, cause the colours blend in a lot
the stars in the eyes are maybe a bit too small
I would prefer if you added some lines to seperate the body and the arms

And please just listen to Hyde, there is outlines on the hoodie eyes which is not allowed. you cant just choose to keep it, cause it won't be accepted like this.

quick harbor
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Since noone in dc had any feedback anymore. Lets see what you can come up with what I can improve👀

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The purple is out of place with the color scheme

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On the hair

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It seems to not really blend with the colors around it, the pink looks more like a small supporting color here, and it looks odd to have it as a main focus on the hair

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But the concept of the design is super good! I really love this

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Arms look weird with the shading

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Makes the arms look barley connected

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To the body

somber bronze
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usually arms dont rly stick to the body either

I think the arm shading is just fine and that's simply how a hoodie works owoPaw
There are such lines because the sleeves are knit to the body part of the shirt at some point owoShrug

quick harbor
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@quick harbor I can’t do much with: it looks weird. Since I don’t see why it looks weird. But if you know how I could “fix” it I can look at it

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Well i dont make shirts so i dont know how to fix it

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Honestly

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Looks like the arm is on backwards

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Maybe reduce the size of the line that goes to the shoulder

somber bronze
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Also i really like the contrast the hair gives as you can see that kind of pink-ish purple in other parts too loke the eyes, the highlights on the octopus-- of wait it's not an octopus bc it has got 7 tentacles cz_flusshed

However i wouldnt change the colour on the hair but adding maybe some more of the colour of the ends onto the shirt instead as the shirt is the only part where this colour isnt represented so that might make it look out of place to some peopleowoPaw

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i think the line on the shoulder is just a thing that is part of the hoodie

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Lemme get a reference pic of it owoTexori

quick harbor
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Mk

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@somber bronze there is a tentacle behind the octopus’s head👀

somber bronze
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@quick harbor oooh i see owoTeehee

upper geode
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I wanna suggest an avatar but I don't have any skills to do it... who can help me?

hazy falcon
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Ik and at the same time idk xD

atomic hearth
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wow thats hot

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it looks so shiny and awesome

hazy falcon
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XD

quick harbor
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The colors are perfect

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Love them

atomic hearth
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all minimods shoukd get this outfit, cause it orange

hazy falcon
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XD

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Ask Philipp xD

quick harbor
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I book this one ahahhha

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I love orange

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Eheh

hazy falcon
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But which bg?

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@next socket i want your feedback 0w0

quick harbor
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Second one

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In my opinion

hazy falcon
quick harbor
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Did you also do eyes? ^^

next socket
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2nd look better

hazy falcon
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Does it look like it? XD

quick harbor
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No just wondering ahahha

hazy falcon
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@next socket okiow

quick harbor
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Since I see 5 objects

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I was expecting a 6th one

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👀

atomic hearth
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I also like the 2nd one more, it's less brihgt and stuff

quick harbor
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Hmm

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What shud be the 6th itwm

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Item*

hazy falcon
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Ye knight go xD

quick harbor
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Wow, its amazing 😍

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Yeah all my work hyde is amazing and did most of it

hazy falcon
somber bronze
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@upper geode you can hmu with it owoPaw

upper geode
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hmu?

quick harbor
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@quick harbor does it maybe look weird because the stripes are too high? Becausr I think that’s what is bothering 🤔

somber bronze
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Hit me upowoTeehee

upper geode
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OHhh

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okay

quick harbor
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I think so @quick harbor

woeful rock
quick harbor
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The bow has outlines and the carrots look a bit like plastic because of the shine. So I would sugfest to remove that shine or make it a different colour

woeful rock
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OK 💕

quick harbor
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@woeful rock oh and could Insee the hair without the hat?👀

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And my feedback on the mouth is still valid😁

hazy falcon
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My whole feedback is still valid

jagged belfry
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A small question can i post my ideas here?

hazy falcon
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Sure ^^ @jagged belfry

jagged belfry
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Wowie those are cute

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Also okay because i made one but idk if something like it already exists and stuff

hazy falcon
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@melon_27 heyo you 0w0thats so cute xD it reminds me of a Pokémon.

The problem for me is, that the eyes have outlines ;-; these are not allowed and you have to remove them. Maybe you can make the eyes.... Cuter? They look kinda cold. You could add a pupil maybe. And big highlights make things cuter too xD
I don't really understand the shading on the right site of the hood ^^' it looks wrong placed.
You need some shading on the ears too, because it looks flat. The stars are weird there....
The darker pink part is also weird.... Why did you make it like this?
My opinion to the shirt is, that it doesn't fit with the hood thing. There are outlines and it looks kinda flat...
The mouth is okay and the eyes too, but the eyes have mirrors highlights.
My feedback from yesterday

quick harbor
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@jagged belfry post it when can tell you😍

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Dont worry ppl here usually arent to judgemental

hazy falcon
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I won't write too much.... Maybe

jagged belfry
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Ah i am too shy to post my drawing here

quick harbor
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U can send it to my dms if u want

hazy falcon
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Dm me? XD

quick harbor
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I wanna see too

hazy falcon
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I mean... We are open for designs 0w0

jagged belfry
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Oop okay

quick harbor
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Yee

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Also if u think ur designs are bad wait till u see some of my old ones

jagged belfry
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I'm not the best artist really so some stuff Night look odd but please bare with me

quick harbor
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I dont think anything like that has been made but their are a lot of outlines which are unfortunatly against the rules

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Dont stree about it though cause thats an easy fix

jagged belfry
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Oh oof

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I can try to fix that

hazy falcon
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0w0 for a first try it's really awesome!
You could make the ears smaller and also the eyes👀 also you have to remove the outlines 👀👀

jagged belfry
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Oooop

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I'll do

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Tho i have No idea why the picture is so blurry but okay

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Thank you i really thought i would be kind of judged or something

hazy falcon
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Why!? We are also designers ^^ don't be scared but proud of the things you create!

jagged belfry
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Okay thank you

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That made me feel alot better acctully

hazy falcon
woeful rock
quick harbor
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Is the bow part of the hat or the shirt? Because it is pretty big

woeful rock
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It's part of the shirt I will try to make it smaller.

quick harbor
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I think you should remove the shine on the rabbit's carrot

quaint bison
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Omg melon I want that outfit so bad qwq

woeful rock
quick harbor
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Way better!

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Just add some details to the bottons (?)

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Or to the t shirt in general

jagged belfry
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Yes i changed some colors

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Also no more derp eyes 😅

woeful rock
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It's cute 👀

jagged belfry
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Thank you

shrewd mirage
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I like it

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The only problem is the shirt

jagged belfry
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Hmm

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Yeah i'm not sure what to do about it really

woeful rock
jagged belfry
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Now that's adorible

quick harbor
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I can see it in clan quest or daily rewards

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Good job

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The front item is pretty flat. Iy could use some more shading. Also hydes feedback for the hood is still valid. And you could add some more shafing to the hair.

honest mural
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Is that good?

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  1. Try😅
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😢 😪

quick harbor
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Is that gradient on the hair?

hazy falcon
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@honest mural gradient is Farbverlauf

somber bronze
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@honest mural i would maybe make it a bit fluffier as it's pretty flat on the head
Something like that owoPaw

honest mural
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Oh I think grandit is shine.
Thanks @quick harbor and @hazy falcon

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Thank you @somber bronze i make it fluffiercute_heart

hazy falcon
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You have to use clean lines and no brush effect yk?

honest mural
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Ok

hazy falcon
somber bronze
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You're welcome owoPaw

jagged belfry
honest mural
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(っ.❛ ᴗ ❛.)っ

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It is so goodcute_heart

jagged belfry
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Owo thanks cute_heart

honest mural
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Btw i Like you Profil Pic

jagged belfry
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Awe thank you a friend drew it for meh uwu

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I like yours too

somber bronze
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@jagged belfry heya owoPaw owoTexori

I drew out few suggestions of things i'd slightly change - red
And a suggestion of how i'd shade the hood

For the suggestions,, the hair hasn't really good sharp edges/tips
I'd suggest you to use a smaller brush to sketch the lineart of the hairshape and then simply fill it in with the colour you want the hair to have owoPaw

The ears could be a bit fluffier,,, and,,, furrier? more furry?
Look more like fur!!! owoTexori
Also for the eyes usually people either use the almond like shape of an actual eye and i would make the eyes a tad smaller as they are very big right now owoPaw

Other than that i wuvvv it aww

quick harbor
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@jagged belfry good to see you are already making progress with your design!

quaint bison
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Is it me or does the shirt have grandient 👀

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The shadowing

hazy falcon
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Nop ^^

somber bronze
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Me making gradient is just as likely as surving in space without an astronaut suit mSip

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It's your phone quality ^^

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Depending on phone quality the stuff looks blurry or doesnt

lucid scaffold
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Which programs u genneraly use?

hazy falcon
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Programms are pinned in here ^^

lucid scaffold
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I didnt see

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Oh there is it

lucid scaffold
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Thx

hazy falcon
jagged belfry
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@somber bronze Thanks for all the tips and help, i really am not good at designing but thanks for showing me ideas, i'll try a little better

somber bronze
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You're welcome owoPaw
And i am sure you'll get better from time to time,, they always do owoTexori
they grow up so fast cz_cry

jagged belfry
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Eeee UwU

lucid scaffold
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I respect all designers so much this is so hard.

quick harbor
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😂

lucid scaffold
hazy falcon
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Please just serious designs ^^

lucid scaffold
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Sorry

honest mural
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Yes thets so goooood

hazy falcon
honest mural
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It is awsome

quick harbor
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Give this guy the designer badge now

next talon
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Would this be ok for post apocalyptic theme? Also any feedback so far? Hair is messy ik

quick harbor
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I love it

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Is the hair final version?

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Oh no

honest mural
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What that is SOOO GOOD how have you make it WoW
I love that

next talon
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Nop is a sketch

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Idk omg I’m just doing something and thought it might be post apocalyptic aa

quick harbor
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Only thing im scared of is knowing you this might be a bit overdetailed so just stay aware when ur drawing @next talon

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Im sure it will turn out awesome

next talon
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Overdetailed where?

quick harbor
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Im the bg

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In*

next talon
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Oh yes idk if I’m gonna do that since idk how to shade fur oof

quick harbor
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If you consider post-apo as a return to the past, well yes

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Well i believe in u😍

next talon
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It’s kinda hard to make a bg post apocalyptic related I can’t find any idea refs:(

quick harbor
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A crashed tank

honest mural
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Make it good PLS
I will that skincute_heart voteyes

quick harbor
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I think a cave would look great!

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Destroyed buildings

next talon
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Yeah was thinking something like crashed cars/buildings too but that’s something I can’t draw easily but I might have to challenge myself

quick harbor
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For post apo i recommend looking at the game series named borderlands @next talon

next talon
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Noted

quick harbor
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Thats where i gave lighze ideas from

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I don't think crashed cars would match the avatar :/

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Im just naming things for any post apo outfit

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Oh k

next talon
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Thanks guys for all ideascute_heart

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Ooo min joined the party

somber bronze
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Basically if everything is destroyed it's not unlikely there will only be wild creatures
Everything erased = back to the beginning and simply things
Just like the... big bang

quick harbor
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I have tons of ideas if u ever need any hmu

somber bronze
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theory

quick harbor
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Yeah exactly

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Yes but not normal creatures

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Different types that are suited to live on the new enviornment

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Will you make both genres or just male?

somber bronze
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Why tho? Depends on the apocalypse ur going for mSip

next talon
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~~this is the female version ~~

somber bronze
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@quick harbor if its for bp it needs to have both👀

quick harbor
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Female?👀

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It looks like a man to me

next talon
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Yes😅

somber bronze
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It's obvious look at the lashes etc👀

next talon
quick harbor
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Ah

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Im gonna use a female outfit for the first time then

next talon
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Hahaha

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If I ever finish this on time I have like 0 time actually to be working on this

quick harbor
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I honestly thought it was a dude

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Looking forward to see the male version (if you'll make it)😍

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With long hair

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Same

next talon
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Will make the male version even more male then

quick harbor
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Yeaahh

next talon
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Females ain’t got time to look pretty in the post apocalyptic x

quick harbor
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Lmao

clear tartan
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indeed

quick harbor
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Lol

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Notkar is alive

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I like lighzes post apo outfits

atomic hearth
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maybe like a big chain fence with plants growing up on it and barbed wire at the top? as a bg

next talon
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Noted tyGWmythicalGhostHug

atomic hearth
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your guy lookslikehe could be a sort of mutant escaped from a government project

quick harbor
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I kinda wanna start doin mutant themed outfita

honest mural
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I have Monsters for you cute_heart

quick harbor
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Yeah those are cool

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Magic👀

honest mural
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Or that

next talon
rancid shore
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Nice

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You could make the van more damaged

quick harbor
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Ye

rancid shore
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Like with broken Windows Steam coming from the engine ext

quick harbor
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Oo nice

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Wow I like the coffin queen

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It's so...

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Me

chrome tree
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you could make the hair go over part of the headpiece thats drawn over the hair?

jagged belfry
hazy falcon
atomic hearth
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I like this hair I want this hair

next talon
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@chrome tree hat is in front of hair:(

chrome tree
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oH

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im dumb

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sorry

next talon
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No it’s okay I wanted to actually do that but yeah layer orders:(((

jagged belfry
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Coools

next talon
hazy falcon
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Petition to change layer order!

next talon
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Which one is better? Or should I do smth else totally

chrome tree
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i like the first one

hazy falcon
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XD

next talon
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Not too busy? The bus one

clear tartan
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Bus one, also that’s so cool

quick harbor
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First

somber bronze
chrome tree
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its kind of busy but i feel like it adds more (suspense?) to the image

quick harbor
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I liked the wolves better but those are pretty cool, too

somber bronze
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^ smae

quick harbor
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@hazy falcon u did the eyes without tellin me😐

somber bronze
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A bus doesnt seem to fit the theme bc she either looks survival-ish and not destroyed-ish

next talon
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I’m not sure if I have time to do the wolves since Philipp said he wants the outfits for bp asap aa

hazy falcon
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Yes was just a try tho

quick harbor
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Ngl those eyes are awesome tho

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Philipp never responded to my gun soo

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Make wolves and aim for special offer (?) 🤔

hazy falcon
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So anyone feedback?

quick harbor
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Use the wolves for somethin else

somber bronze
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Nah

quick harbor
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Yes

somber bronze
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I would suggest changing the bg to something more simple fitting the survival theme either

quick harbor
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I honestly think it should stay like this😂

hazy falcon
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?

quick harbor
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@hazy falcon is that outline on the t-shirt?

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Maybe more destruction

somber bronze
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Bc the bus kind of looks like a forced idea and out of place with the rough theme going on imo owoPaw

hazy falcon
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@quick harbor no

quick harbor
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Uhm

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Looked like it

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The rest is pretty cool as I said ^^

hazy falcon
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I know the rules so I follow them

quick harbor
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Yeah, that's why I asked

hazy falcon
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^^

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@quick harbor name?

next talon
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Any feedback on my outfit btw?

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Beside bg lol

quick harbor
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I need the mask now

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Lel

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Virtual Reality

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Lol

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Im simple

hazy falcon
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@next talon I love it xD wanna help my creep collection? XD

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@quick harbor anything to change?

quick harbor
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Nah

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Looks fine

hazy falcon
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Okay ^^

quick harbor
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Scp is a good ref for creepy stuff

next talon
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Xd

quick harbor
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@hazy falcon^^

hazy falcon
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Then I will discuss it now

somber bronze
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@next talon may just some destroyed trees instead?
Fits the savage look more and is not too hard to make owoPaw 👀

The rest of it looks great though, no more feedback owoTexori

next talon
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Really? Everything is ok?😳

quick harbor
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Bus is cool tho👀

clear tartan
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^ Ye but might take too much

quick harbor
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She already did it above

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😝

somber bronze
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Well it doesnt fit the scheme AYAYASip

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And there is no harm in trying other ideas👀👀

next talon
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Nah imo the bus is a bit too busy even though I do like the idea

quick harbor
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Fits it fine honestly

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Depends how u see it

somber bronze
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owoPaw agreed nagini

quick harbor
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Maybe like a destroyed industry building

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Kinda like the bottom one

clear tartan
quick harbor
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Is this from Rust?

clear tartan
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Nop

next talon
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Intwestin👀

quick harbor
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I get all my post apo refs from borderlands

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Or cod

clear tartan
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^ exactly, borderlands

next talon
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I’m searching in Pinterest and everything looks so cool but impossible to convert to Wwo style:(

quick harbor
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What u lookin at

next talon
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Lol my screenshot is more than 8 mb cant show but rn I’m searching for post apocalyptic landscapes

quick harbor
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A swamp could kinda work

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Matches the shirt

next talon
spring mauve
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i mean u could do smth like that but it would be hard👀

quick harbor
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That could work

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Looks more difficult thwn the bus

next talon
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Simplified ofc

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I’ll try it

quick harbor
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Tent isnt as hard as a bus I believe

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Great idea

next talon
hazy falcon
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0w0

clear tartan
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Oh gawd

quick harbor
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Damn

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I love it

next talon
quick harbor
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You should move the background

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I really like the thing on the right

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The door?

atomic hearth
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yeah maybe better if the black hole isnt too visible, the door is nice ^^

quick harbor
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Yet this is easier than a bus for you

atomic hearth
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its a really cool idea

next talon
quick harbor
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Oo flag change

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I wanna like

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Shoot the fire thing

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On the left

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Hmmmm has a flamethrower been made before

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I love how you detailed it @next talon

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Feel like is has

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It(

next talon
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Off to sleep now gn

chrome tree
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its looks really nice

quick harbor
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What's the box size?

next talon
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how it would look ig

atomic hearth
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the size of the regular avatar bg

quick harbor
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Ohh

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Ty guys

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@next talon what do you use to design?

next talon
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procreate on ipad pro:)

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there’s a mobile version for it too if i’m right but i haven’t used that

quick harbor
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Oki ty ^^ and gn

woeful rock
topaz silo
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Aww that’s cute. The only problem I have with it are the stars. I believe all the stars should be yellow or just no stars at all

coarse sage
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And the star in the girl version has shadow but the boy’s doesnt

molten canopy
iron fox
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LMAO

flat badge
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Wut xD

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Fit in the game?

iron fox
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i need help with shading this, idk how should i shade it “cartoon-style” cause usually i use gradients so-

rancid shore
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@molten canopy i highly doubt that is copyrighted (power rangers are copyrighted )

molten canopy
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No not copyrighted not same detail

rancid shore
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But it looks cool lighze

coarse sage
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It’s not same but like copyrighted idea

hazy falcon
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@molten canopy they will take it for another power ranger seriesOESealCuddle

quaint bison
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I wove it

flat badge
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Avatar frame in game is so little

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Just 3 people from sect game was very crowded

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5 people was not acrossing other players' avatar frame?

grand isle
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lol those are individual outfits

quaint bison
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@molten canopy I see a battlepas koekje

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Jk

novel grove
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😓

quaint bison
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Bootiful

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But maybe different hair-back- and crown styles:3

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En the money thing already exists

burnt apex
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and less saturated colors

novel grove
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How to open voting?

atomic hearth
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That outfit already exists in game

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and you cant put it to vote, you submit it to staffwhen its done... these are not done yet

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needs more shading and detail, and hair

novel grove
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Thanks

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I have to do better.

novel grove
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comment me

burnt apex
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outlined aren't allowed

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what program do you use to design?

novel grove
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Paint. net

burnt apex
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try using one of the pinned programs, your lines will look cleaner!

novel grove
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Isn't it good right now?

shrewd mirage
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Except sketch

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You cant fill things with sketch

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And the lines arent clean too

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I dont like skecth

novel grove
iron fox
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no outline

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its good but the only problem is outlines arent allowed

novel grove
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Must be separated But one piece too, right?@iron fox

iron fox
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no

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i meant like

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no lines

novel grove
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Okay, I will update again once.

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Thank you for the word that went to improve.

next talon
iron fox
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i think it looks great the way it is now

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also i really need help on shading this, i’ve tried searching up videos but none of the shading styles i’ve tried fits

somber bronze
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@iron fox i am trying to sketch something out real quickowoPaw

quick harbor
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Still honestly think the top one looks more like a dude but the shirt is fine

iron fox
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maybe for the girl just remove the jacket?

quick harbor
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Nah

flat badge
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Hairstyle look likes Ammon 😂 @next talon

iron fox
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lmao

next talon
iron fox
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hmm

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maybe a weapon

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lile

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like

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chainsaw?

honest mural
#

Maybe this?

honest mural
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Is that good?

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And is that allowed?

somber bronze
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@honest mural looks betterowoPaw
And yup,, that's allowed 👀
You could maybe improve the shading thoowoPaw
brrrbb againn👀

iron fox
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tysm <3

somber bronze
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You're welcome! owoTexori cz_3d_hearts

honest mural
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Pk Thanks cute_heart

quick harbor
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I need to ask

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What is the

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Black dot orsm
Above the left eye

somber bronze
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Eyebrow most likely owoPaw

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When people draw animal-ish eyebrows they often do them in the shape of little teardrops

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Example - white wolf outfit in game

quick harbor
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Ohh

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I thought it was like

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How do you call it omg

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EHM

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A birthmark ^^^

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Jeez took me long enough

somber bronze
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@honest mural something around the red lines for the shading owoPaw
Thats the style many ppl use for shading hair its kind of like the go to shading style for wwo 👀

iron fox
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i finished shading, is there anything i should add besides the background?

next talon
shrewd mirage
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Thats cool

coarse sage
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Anyone give me some feedbacks to make it better please GWmythiMonkaT

next socket
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GWmythicalGrandCat @coarse sage nicee

coarse sage
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GWmythicalGrandCat

hazy falcon
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@coarse sage are you both planning to add shading in the hair?

coarse sage
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Yeah, but i dont know how should i draw...Im bad at making shadow and she's too feelsfunny

hazy falcon
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Hmmmm

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Too xD

coarse sage
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Rip us GWmythiMonkaT

hazy falcon
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Lime was our hair goddess

coarse sage
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Where is she GWmythicalFeelsSadMan

hazy falcon
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She is not here ^^

coarse sage
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And do you have any feedback for us? I expect about your feedback so much GWmythicalGhostHug

rancid shore
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vanished

hazy falcon
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Back to the outfit. The eyes are pretty big. Maybe you could try to make them smaller and higher placed.

rancid shore
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Where is the mouth 👀

hazy falcon
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I think there will be one so I didn't say anything xD

coarse sage
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Okay i will fix it, thank u so much @hazy falcon about the mouth, we didnt draw anything for it (dont have any idea too feelsfunny ). And the template i get doesnt have the mouth, rip feelsfunny

hazy falcon
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alpacauwu I could give more feedback but 👀

coarse sage
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But what GWmythicalFeelsSadMan 🌨

rancid shore
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@coarse sage which program did you use ?

coarse sage
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@rancid shore Illustrator CC 2017

rancid shore
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I dont know anything about that lol

hazy falcon
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@coarse sage but I like it and wait for the "last version" so I can conclude everything in it ^^

coarse sage
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@hazy falcon Ah okayy, i will make it done as soon as possible, anyway thank u GWmythicalGhostHug 💓

hazy falcon
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Take your time OESealCuddle

quick harbor
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@next talon I preferred the other one ^^

quick harbor
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@coarse sage i love it!!
But the left bun should be a bit better. Its so weird with the hat

coarse sage
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@quick harbor okay, thanks for your feedback, i will fix it asap GWmythicalGhostHug

quick harbor
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@coarse sage
You should make a boy one too!
I'd love to see it! koekje

coarse sage
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Oh really, we planned to make a boy but..GWmythiMonkaT

quick harbor
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If you still have it, I would like to see it!
You can always just copy the girl version.
And then change the eye shape, hair, etc :p

coarse sage
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Okay, just planned and we havent made it yet. But i will try a little, thank you GWmythicalGhostHug 💓

median portal
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@next talon Teach me how to draw senpai

next talon
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@quick harbor ill still keep the other shirt for the male tho but ill try something else for female

honest mural
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@somber bronze Thanks for so many helpcute_heart 😅

quick harbor
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Nice

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Really want to see what the male version will look like😍

median portal
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Ohh yes

next talon
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mine?

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or

median portal
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thhis skin will be great

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YOURS

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ofc

next talon
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i alr sent it

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aaa

quick harbor
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Ohhhh

next talon
quick harbor
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Coool😍

next talon
#

imagine the scars and hat on it

quick harbor
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I will use the female hair tho

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👀

next talon
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i hope this will make the bp

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then i can rest in peace

empty vapor
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What app do you use to draw?

next talon
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procreate on ipad pro

empty vapor
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Oh great~

next talon
median portal
#

SO GOOD

buoyant mantle
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bATtLe pAsS?! YES PLEASE! this looks so good!

somber bronze
#

Hello everyone,,
As you all may know, there is a side server of wwo which is dedicated to designing and designing only!
But,, recently we - the dc moderator team - got a suggestion on maybe adding some channels where any kind of art can get posted!
Simply to receive support, get feedback eventually, show the stuff you're proud of and develop further as an artist.
So, we decided, to add a new category!
It's called #Artist support
From now on and furthermore you can not only develop your designing skills,, but also your general art skills in designer club! owoPaw
This is a change we are pretty excited about and this message is just meant as a  little reminder;

If you want to start designing and receive help from others during that progress or if you are already designing and would like to receive app help, designing help in general and/or develop further as artist make sure to join our WWO Designer Club!
We'd be very grateful if we could welcome  YOU  in our lovely little server! cz_3d_hearts owoTexori

https://discord.gg/mqmRHXm
[Approved by LisuowoTexori]

quick harbor
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👀

hazy falcon
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@somber bronze pin? ^^

somber bronze
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Sure if you wannaowoPaw

blazing swallow
#

okay. so is there an official layout i have to use to create my own avatar designs?

hazy falcon
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@blazing swallow heck the pinned messages ^^

blazing swallow
#

i’m dummy

hazy falcon
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Nah it's fine ^^

blazing swallow
#

okay i’m getting inkscape

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get ready for some weird/cool designs

clear tartan
#

looking forward to them 👀

quick harbor
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Same

blazing swallow
#

who the heck is Lighze

hazy falcon
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@blazing swallow if you need help, I'm also inkscape user ^^

blazing swallow
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and why are they like in every other design

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god i butchered that.

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thank you @hazy falcon

hazy falcon
quick harbor
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Lighze is an amazing hardworking artist. Creating a big variety of skins👀

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Now I really want to buy a tablet

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@hazy falcon dont ask me about your creepy stuff. Im no expert😂

blazing swallow
#

i see that 😩 and maybe teeth but that might make the rings look weird

quick harbor
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Drawing on mobile with fingersthe isnt that good

hazy falcon
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@quick harbor I'm also not an expert!

blazing swallow
#

we need some spooky designs for the game?

quick harbor
hazy falcon
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@blazing swallow ot really, but I like to make spook stuff like Bob and Joshua

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Not really *

quick harbor
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Feedback for hair?🤔

blazing swallow
#

the center part with the hairline is a bit... too distracting

quick harbor
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Wait, which part

blazing swallow
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the hairline in the center

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of the hair

quick harbor
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The darker one?

blazing swallow
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yes

quick harbor
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Oh, gonna delete it ^^

blazing swallow
#

it’s just my opinion though.

hazy falcon
quick harbor
#

Yeah, your opinion was good. Looks better now!

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Maybe too detailed

atomic hearth
#

too realistic would be be more holes around where the rings enter the skin 👀

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its an interesting idea btw

hazy falcon
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More blood?

quick harbor
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Maje amazing propic btw😂

tall geyser
#

@hazy falcon it looks really good but i think its too detailed to be shown clearly in game?

hazy falcon
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I can do it like Joshua's eyes

atomic hearth
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amazing wut?

hazy falcon
blazing swallow
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oh my tbat is a ghoul if i have ever seen one

quick harbor
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Still waiting for this skin to get added

tall geyser
quick harbor
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Is it gradient what I see on the horns?

tall geyser
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Nah its hand drawn

quick harbor
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Nope

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Or maybe my phone blurs the image

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Sorry my bad

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Fake gradient tricks everyone😂

tall geyser
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😂

quick harbor
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Oh no, it's a trap

hazy falcon
atomic hearth
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the horns look nice, I can always use more horns ^^
I dont really like the little diamonds on the mask, it looks cluttered and doesnt make much sense on a mask shape to me

tall geyser
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My first theme was "something with crystals" but i have kinda went out of that path

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So what can u suggest me to replace it?

atomic hearth
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Perhaps just 1 big crystal in the middle, or a row of 3 perhaps

tall geyser
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I'll think of that, thank you @atomic hearth

atomic hearth
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@hazy falcon hmm i wasnt telling you to change anything, but yeah actually does look better, more like the rings have been there a while and its kinda scarred up instead of bloody ^^

hazy falcon
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I wanted to add a mouth too ☺️

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Because something is missing idk

blazing swallow
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@hazy falcon 👀 where is the color dropper thing

hazy falcon
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You can just click one color. You make a shape and then click one of the color on the Scala ^^ to remove the outline, you hold shift

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Shift and the white square with the "x" in it

blazing swallow
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yeah this program frustrates me

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it doesn’t work with the hot keys i’m used to for
sai photoshop illustrator and fire alpaca

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which i thought was universal

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like i can’t even get the template to stay in place. after i push enter it should lock into canva s

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i just locked the layer so :/

quick harbor
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@blazing swallow you don’t need to use inkscape if you don’t want to. It’s preferred because of svg files but not necessary

blazing swallow
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yea that’s why i want to use it.
i found out. i just need to press F7

hazy falcon
#

XD

somber bronze
#

Super cute👀 owoPaw

empty vapor
hazy falcon
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@empty vapor hey ^^ do you want some feedback? 👀

empty vapor
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Yes🥺

hazy falcon
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Okay! ^^

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Okay ^^ so first, I really like it, because it's kinda something else 0w0
Lets start with the hair 👀 the... I will call it shading (dark violet) on top is okay, but you could also add another color between the dark and light color... Because the difference is big. Then you can make the current dark color in the new and add shading in the current color. Just as idea I got, because the left of the hair looks like one bug violet shape and definitely needs more detail/shading/structure. Also it could be, that the bottom part on this site is too far away from the head. If you understand what I mean....
The earring looks pretty big, but I think it's fine. Just one thing: please move it more, that it doesn't "flies" up xD earrings are hanging on the ears 0w0
The eyes are too big 👀 if you make them smaller, please also move them a little bit down, because if not, it doesn't fit anymore. Also you used mirrored highlights in the eyes. You can do it, but it's not used that much anymore
The shirts shading yould be improved a little bit. One sited shading isn't used that much anymore, because it looks weird.

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@empty vapor

blazing swallow
hazy falcon
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@blazing swallow try to make the tips thinner 👀

empty vapor
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I will bring it to improve! 💗 thank you very much I can improve it because of your feedback i love u!👍🏻

hazy falcon
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ANGERYCRY I love u tooOESealCuddle

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Good luck improving ^^

quick harbor
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Hyde you so kind ^^

blazing swallow
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@hazy falcon tmw they got no lips

hazy falcon
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bcaBarkingAngry2 @quick harbor

quick harbor
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I only have standard emojis😅

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And the server ones

blazing swallow
honest mural
hazy falcon
blazing swallow
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i’m going to add eyeliner oof

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and thank you

blazing swallow
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this is what i got atm @hazy falcon

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ill work on the other stuff later

viscid surge
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Thats really cool

quick harbor
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The eyes are original, I like them!

quick harbor
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Wow u have progressed a lot

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Looks good

tall geyser
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I really need idea on how to shade the hair, i tried fake gradient on it too and it looked really bad

quick harbor
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I love it so far😍

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@tall geyser i do believe similar horns are in game though and are the small wings the background?

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Eyes may be a little big as well

tall geyser
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I don't want to touch the eyes at this point cuz if i make it smaller it will get pixelated more

quick harbor
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These were the similar eyes

tall geyser
#

Well there are a lot of horns ig

quick harbor
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True just be kinda weary

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Not trying to say its a bad idea at all

tall geyser
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I can try to change the color through filter

quick harbor
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May i ask what program do you use?

tall geyser
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Ibis paint x

quick harbor
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Ok i use the same

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I still think the eyes need to be smaller because it will still look better when traced into a svg

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Also the wing position bothers me because i dont understand what they are connected to

tall geyser
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They are not connected

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Idk im out of ideas at this point 🤣

quick harbor
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Its fine lol i think some small wings would be cute

tall geyser
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Ill make the eyes smaller lile you said

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I know that horns look kinda similar to the ones that have been added before, i actually tried to make it a bit more different

quick harbor
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Yeah they are fine just wanted to make sure you didnt change them to make them the same

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Honestly the eyes could even stay lookin at some of the outfits in vote

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But i think it would work better with glasses and stuff if they are smaller

tall geyser
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Ok i'll try thank you for your help 👍

iron fox
quick harbor
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Looks good for me... but i dont like the black dot above the eye and that the mask? infront of the mouth is so sharp at the end by the ears.. and the gap between the shirt and the thing above( sorry i dont know the word at the moment) @iron fox

iron fox
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idk how to call it either lol

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coat?

quick harbor
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yea would say you can call it coat

iron fox
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alright, ty for the feedback!

quick harbor
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maybe a bit of color transition from the horns to the hair

quick harbor
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@atomic hearth hey bro can u help me out rl quick

atomic hearth
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Hey dude, sure thing

quick harbor
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We arent sure wat to do with the green parts

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We were gonna make it like acid what do you think

atomic hearth
#

the acid idea looks good, but maybe make the zigzag part more like tubes?
like you're pumping acid through it to power the gun?

quick harbor
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Good idea

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Thanks😍

waxen lily
#

Can help me suggest adding details or editing. 💁‍♀️

noble canyon
#

the eyes are too low and the left avatar's ones are too close together

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maybe add a cap without top? and I think a ponytail or a bun is more comfortable at the beach/pool if u have long hair

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and that's a nice opportunity for a shirtless item 👀 just saying

waxen lily
#

Thank you so much cute_heart

coarse sage
noble canyon
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cute but the eyes are too low

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and the shirt blends with the back thing

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and the bangs shading could be more worked on

coarse sage
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Okay thank you GWmythicalGhostHug

noble canyon
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np

quick harbor
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@coarse sage looks simple and very well executed! Good job ^^

soft cliff
quick harbor
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The whole thing looks nice, but I don't like the mask and I guess hair needs shading (Idk if you planned to do that)

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Is that blue thing mask or glasses?

soft cliff
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glasses @quick harbor

quick harbor
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And im gonna write feedback hyde style!

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My bad, is that just a base

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@soft cliff first a question: what theme are you going for?
Glasses: they need to be above the hair layer. I think it looks pretty interesting and im curious how you will develop
Hair: it can indeed use some more shading. Maybe try some bigger shapes as shading instead of small lines. A tip: look in vote for some hairstyles you like and look how other people shade hair.
Eyes: for what I can see they look goodGWofxLove
Shirt: looks interesting. I don’t really understand what those little darks shapes are. The thick line in the middle looks like a zipper but I’m not sure, but if it is make it more defined. I would personally put a bigger shadow on the left side just like the hair.

barren harness
#

Jin and Hyde's feedback are the best 👏

quick harbor
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👀

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Min min also has written some really good feedback in dc👀

barren harness
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👀

soft cliff
#

the tematic is 'futurist'

elfin cosmos
#

How do I create an avatar to post here?

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Brazil,pode ser br

noble canyon
#

the hair is nice but it would be more pleasing if it was centered tbh

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@elfin cosmos there are messages pinned with all information you need

empty vapor
hazy falcon
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@empty vapor check the pinned messages 👀

empty vapor
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Ok thx 💗

hazy falcon
empty vapor
nocturne moat
somber bronze
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@soft cliff looks good imo but it might look better if the glasses thingy was extended to cover the nose too ^^

The shirt looks cool but it lacks shading and arm separations,,, i would add some arm separations in the dark grey shading colour you used owoPaw
The chain is a detail which seems to be too small to be seen in game, atleast the upper part of it, so i'd suggest making the single parts of the chain the same bigness throughout,, and i think the bigness it has got at the bottom is a good oneowoTexori

For futuristic i'd add some more saturated blue on the shirt maybe to make it look a bit more like a fluroishing, neon, future thingy👀

The shading should either be inverted so -> the parts you left light should be darker instead as usually the shading style is more of the tips being darker rather than the top part being darker ^^

If you want some front item ideas i'd suggest maybe adding like a,,, i dont quite know why but i could picture it with a sort of neon sword? Depending on what ur going for with it ^^
And maybe some wires or something similar as back item?
Also maybe pick up the colour of the glasses a bit more in like the front item/back item or anything else as the turquoise is barely represented in the outfit yet

But that's a great start and a nice design,, i really like it and i can't wait to see the final version HR_BlobLove owoMilkRose

nocturne moat
iron fox
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also, feedback

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i tried making the alpha ww lol

opaque wyvern
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I see that it is a mask, but if u make an opened wolf mouth on it, it would be really cool. The wolf should baritone his teeth and spit should drip from the corners of the mouth

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@iron fox

empty vapor
quick harbor
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Hair is too flat in the upper parts and looks unrealistic
Apart from that I really like the hair stylecute_heart

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@iron fox mask layer is above hair layer👀
The mask can use some detail, because it’s just a black mask right now.
The eyes are too close together.
But you are doing a good job!

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@empty vapor I agree with pumpkin. The hair is too flat on the head. It can use some more volume? I don’t know if that is the right word. The sketch for the eyes js already looking good! Though are those the default eyebrows? If yes are you planning on making eyebrows yourself? Because it’s highly preferred if you try make them yourselfGWofxLove

empty vapor
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I will improve thank you👌

iron fox
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so i have to make mask layer above hair layer? @quick harbor

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looks weird, let me change it

quick harbor
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i dont really like it..... but at the right ear you might have done 1 or 2 mistakes ( the mask goes on to the ear not like on the left) and hair there is also a bit diffrent @iron fox

iron fox
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ah okay, just realized that. thanks lol

quick harbor
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@iron fox if you want to do a whole mouth. Maybe it is an idea to do it without the black mask. So like only the mouth

iron fox
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i mean i really suck at doing wolf teeth lol

opaque wyvern
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the mouth is not so wide and the teeth are sharper at the top and flatter and wider at the bottom. You could also whiten the teeth

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Like so

iron fox
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ah

quick harbor
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@iron fox I love your design!! cute_heart

iron fox
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thanks! <3

quick harbor
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I would like it less if teeths are added actually, I like how it looks so cool right now

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I don't like it being "creepy"

opaque wyvern
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Yes. It is really cool

quick harbor
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Just my unprofessional opinions, don't even care about them.

opaque wyvern
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It shouldn't be creepy, just like agressive

quick harbor
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The teeths being on the mask seem weird imo

iron fox
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yeah ig

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maybe ill remove the mask lol

quick harbor
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No! Don't!

opaque wyvern
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But without anything it looks strange in my opinion

quick harbor
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The mask looks very nice

opaque wyvern
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I Like the Mask to

iron fox
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ill draw the mouth and compare it

quick harbor
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I think the eyebrows is what should be changed. Currently it looks kinda "peaceful"

opaque wyvern
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Ohh nice

iron fox
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yeah i changed thhem

quick harbor
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Make the eyebrows sharper so it looks more agressive

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Nice!

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I'm deeply in love with it now!

iron fox
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makes a big difference lol

opaque wyvern
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I likevoteyes

quick harbor
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Just , well , don't add teeths please 😂

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It would look very odd

iron fox
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lol yeah

opaque wyvern
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We need your meaning @hazy falcon

iron fox
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this was my original idea but thought it looked to similiar to another mouth

opaque wyvern
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Okay, that looks strange

quick harbor
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Um, it looks bad :/

hazy falcon
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I'm outside xD

quick harbor
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xD Hyde

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:godhyde:

iron fox
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pray

quick harbor
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@hazy falcon The hair layer is above the mask layer ,right?

hazy falcon
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Na mask is always above hair

quick harbor
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Kinda weird?

hazy falcon
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Yes it is weird, and we already suggested to change the layer order ^^

quick harbor
iron fox
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yeah lol

quick harbor
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i meant it the whole time 🙈

hazy falcon
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That's how it is ^^

quick harbor
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I love how the design is now. I would love to bring it in game cute_heart

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Hope it's a quest avatar, I cannot afford if it's a special offer

iron fox
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lmao same

quick harbor
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cough

iron fox
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reason i only made male was because i was hoping it would be a clan quest avatar so i could get it lol

quick harbor
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lol voteyes

hazy falcon
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@iron fox can I trace it later and look how it is then? ^^ also I would give you feedback then

quick harbor
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@iron fox But actually, if your design gets into the game, you will get it, without doing clan quest/buying from special offer.

iron fox
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didnt know that lol

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also sure hyde

quick harbor
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🎉

hazy falcon
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Okay ^^ I gtg again. I'm back in 30 mins

iron fox
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alright.

tall brook
quick harbor
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I kind of don't like the eyes. They look kinda too big?

iron fox
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looks awesome, and yeah what magi said.

burnt apex
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that's really cool!! :000 i'd make the irises bigger, but it's a great concept

tall brook
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@quick harborok noted :)

quick harbor
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Overall, I think it's cool. But I do think the eyes need fix. But it's better to hear from professional rather than listening to me - an idiot who doesn't know anything about designing haha

tall brook
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@iron foxthanks

iron fox
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also the irises should expand

quick harbor
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I personally don't like the helmet as well. It makes the face kinda odd.

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But ehh, don't care about what I said. You should ask from Hyde#0110 instead

tall brook
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Damn I forgot to ask him @quick harbor

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Anyway noted!:D
Will improve them all

quick harbor
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Haha, go ask him then. He's gonna give you long comments

iron fox
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yeah lol

quick harbor
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Hyde is a girl👀

iron fox
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oh

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o h

quick harbor
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Oof

tall brook
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Wait so this whole time I though he was a guy

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She I meant

quick harbor
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¯_(ツ)_/¯

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@tall brook
I think the eyes are too high placed. The eye shape is a bit weird and the iris is on the small side. I would suggest to look at some eyes in vote and maybe try doing something similar. But that is ofcourse your choice🙌
The hair can use some shading. And maybe add some hair on the left side, because right now the hair on the right is higher.
The shirt could just use some more shading.
Also try to keep a specific light source in mind. BecauseI see some highlights on both the right and the left side.

tall brook
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👍 ✅ 👌 100%

burnt apex
tawny cosmos
devout basalt
coarse sage
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Ok i have done it. So do anyone have suggestions for adding details or editing something pls flower_child

burnt apex
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i would make the tips of the hair darker

quick harbor
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The shading on the hat are pretty harsh. I would suggest to make the shadows lighter. Also maybe add some more shadows to the hair

coarse sage
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okay thx u ❤ i will fix it

soft cliff
ancient wagon
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Good

quick harbor
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@coarse sage
You changed the hair!
I love it :3

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Still complaining there is no boy version 👀
Would buy that

coarse sage
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Yes, i think mix two colors should be better

quick harbor
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@coarse sage why is there no mouth?

coarse sage
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i dont think people will like to buy it so...

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@quick harbor because the template i get doesnt have mouth lol 😂

quick harbor
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🙈 i love your avatar

coarse sage
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thank uu cute_heart i will try to make it better

somber bronze
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Heya @tall brook owoPaw
First of all,, its recommend that the iris touches the eyelid/top of the eye as if it doesn't the person looks like they are scared or surprised when i think this look should either be fierce?

I'd also suggest adding a thin eyeline in black and some highlights as the eyes look pretty dead atm,,, as for the armor, it looks good but too plain in comparison to the helmet, try avoiding half shading and add some more highlights/shading to the armor to make it look like iron too cz_3d_hearts

As for the helmet i think the wings are placed too low and maybe a tad too big? I'd maybe put them either where the darker grey part of the helmet begins with the lowest point of the wing and also shade the dark grey part a bit more or either highlight it aswell

Imo the wing on the our left side at the armor isn't really necessary and would probably look better if removed ^^
I'd also shade the blue fabric part a bit furtherowoPaw

Thats basically it,,, i really like the concept tho keep up the great workowoTexori single_rose

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@coarse sage

This is sooo cutee
But to be honest i would suggest to add few highlights to the hat and the shirt!

Currently the pink looks a tad out of place as its the only pink item sooo how about making the front item a pink/rosé lotus flower instead? ^^
As this outfit reminds me a lot of lotus!
and i already saw like alot of frog items being made and a flower might fit better👀

As for the hair,,, i'd suggest not making the tips highlighted but rather darker and adding some highlights at the top of the hair instead,,, if you get what i mean?
As for the eyes, the highlights are mirrored what i prefer them not to be and also idk if its only me but the left and right eye look different colour-wise, like the left our left one looks darker than the right one,,,

Also did you add eyebrows/are there eyebrows yet?
If no - you should probably add someowoPaw

your template has an inverted dark and light side i just saw,,, maybe try downloading the one in the pinned messages instead, that might result in a better final look

If you want to add a mask i would suggest a mouth with some pink-ish lips and a lotus leaf/like a lake leaf inside of their mouth you know what i mean? The ones which swim on lakes and frogs sometimes sit on owoTexori cz_3d_hearts

Over all this is a very cute and nice design,,, cant wait to see the final version of it!!! 👀 single_rose

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@burnt apex
Looks greeeat,,, thoo i would make some sliight changes
The eyes are still pretty high,, maybe make the mask a bit smaller and less static? Like its two clean edges maybe give it some more edges etc?

Also as for the wires,, they are usually not rly straight but either curved so that is why they aren't recognisable at first/it's hard to tell what they are...
I really love the background and eyes tho,, i also love love love the hair and shirt

Butt maybe make the red parts on the shirt with a more saturated red because they are barely even visible,, also the arm separations could be a bit thicker

But other than that i really loveee ittt and can't wait to see the finished versionnn owoPaw ❤ ❤

coarse sage
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@somber bronze thanks for your feedback, i get what you mean ^^ will fix it as soon as possible cute_heart

somber bronze
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Can't wait to see it rooInLove

quick harbor
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I'd like an Avatar of the Character Eren Jäger from Attack on Titan. I can't imagine how dope it would look

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Could be a copyright issue since Attack on Titan is a big movie or something like that

hazy falcon
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Attack on titan is an anime and yes it is copyrighted

tawny cosmos
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🤔

hazy falcon
quick harbor
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awesome but a bit too spooky for me

hazy falcon
quick harbor
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Awesome! On the edge with the details tho👀

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As it is I love it

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@hazy falcon
Looks like Lisa!
Kidding lol ly Lisa

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I really like the eyes ❤

hazy falcon
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Ty ^^

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