#Sakura SMB DS

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edgy heron
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and also the really elevated map points

trail vapor
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yeah the map points, there's that

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oh

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fire flower bug? why is it not the first time i see it... (i saw it for example in nsmbu ds)

remote star
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Its a bug in The custom powerups wich fire flower and mushroom cant be collected with boomerang

trail vapor
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yeah weird bug

remote star
trail vapor
floral hemlock
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jpg, can you try starting making a bit better screenshots?

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i mean, without the emulator buttons and better quality if possible

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it's okay if you don't do that but im sure it would've been better

remote star
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The quality im not sure why it gets like that, but ill do it for the button n stuff

floral hemlock
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try to search up in the settings somekind of option regarding screenshotting

remote star
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Yea ill do

floral hemlock
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pain

remote star
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Feel free to change everything (beside the path if possible)

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Ngl idk why i did that type of map

floral hemlock
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Sure, if you want then suggest anything you want in it

remote star
trail vapor
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the path should have some height variations imo

remote star
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And remove the lava since no level have it

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Yea true

floral hemlock
remote star
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The one next to the grass level in the left

floral hemlock
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JPG, can you make this in w1?

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it's 3 layers

remote star
# remote star Yea true

@floral hemlock u can change the Y position of stuff in the path, pls dont change the X and Z tho since it would be hard for me to edit

remote star
floral hemlock
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i want to do the same thing on w2 too

remote star
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Its possible

remote star
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To add height variation

remote star
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OOOO

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Ig without the grass tho but yea its pretty neat

trail vapor
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something that gives the same vibe, with grass, the volcanoes, some rocky floor, etc

remote star
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Peak ngl

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@floral hemlock what u think?

trail vapor
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(i've suggested this like twice... but okay)

floral hemlock
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i love you jpg

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dont change

remote star
trail vapor
remote star
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Yea

trail vapor
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and the trees usually (not always) grow where there's grass around too

floral hemlock
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how the hell did you do this jpg

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it's suspposed to be ___

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not |

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😭

remote star
floral hemlock
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now good luck doing this in w1

remote star
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LMAO

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WHY IT DONT HAVE FACE

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WHY I DIDN'T ADDED FACE

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WHY IT DONT EVEN HAVE FACE

floral hemlock
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do you have any beach tileset?

remote star
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Nah

floral hemlock
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and could you send me current w2 tileset

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or just send me every tileset you have lol

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😭

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IN DMS JPG

remote star
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Oops

floral hemlock
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YOU STILL HAVENT UPDATED IT EITHER

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ILL MURDR YOU

remote star
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This one is the one i have on my ohone

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phone*

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The game one is updated

floral hemlock
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layout spoiler

remote star
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Ngl this is fire

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U made the shitty layout GOOD

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Btw @floral hemlock u dont need to hide the house

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I can move it unlike the nodes

floral hemlock
remote star
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@floral hemlock do it like that

remote star
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LOOKS GOOD

floral hemlock
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bridge stays

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but the other idea i had

remote star
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I LOVE IT

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ITS PEAK

remote star
# floral hemlock

On the sand part, add a rock in the node part, remove the paths and add bridges

floral hemlock
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learned how to bevel correctly

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now i can remake w1 again Trol

remote star
floral hemlock
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I PLANNED SUCH A GOOD LEVEL

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SPECIFICALLY FOR THIS PART

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DIE

remote star
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But add this rock still

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Cuz ill use that island tileset u made

floral hemlock
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yes

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let me make the level πŸ™

remote star
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Add grass patch here btw:

remote star
floral hemlock
edgy heron
remote star
floral hemlock
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we moving this level then on here Trol

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it will fit better i guess

remote star
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This level have secret exit

floral hemlock
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yes exactly

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ah wait

remote star
floral hemlock
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switch order of those levels then and modify the areas

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that level will fit perfectly to that place

edgy heron
remote star
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Oki

floral hemlock
remote star
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@floral hemlock moved

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2-2 now 2-A

floral hemlock
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ELTS GOOOOOOOO

trail vapor
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this worldmap is not what i had imagined at all... CryingCat

floral hemlock
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yes

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because it's in progress

trail vapor
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i guess

remote star
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Done

floral hemlock
remote star
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@floral hemlock bullet bill level on 2-2

floral hemlock
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because i want to do footprints path actually

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like from marioarrt hack

remote star
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I didn't wanted to make mario jump cuz its kinda annoying to do

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Couuld u add the bridge and rock, so i dont make mario jump, but add foot print in other part?

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Of the sand?

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And palm tree and such

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Oh when exporting dont do ctrl j

floral hemlock
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then send me palm models, trees and other stuff that im too lazy to export MarioOkay

remote star
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Ill add to the tree model

remote star
floral hemlock
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I'll see as i continue on this map

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wait, will any level have a lava?

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it would've been cool if yeah

remote star
floral hemlock
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omg which one

remote star
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Ronzer level

floral hemlock
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alr

remote star
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GOAT IDEA:
ADD A RONZER NEXT TO THIS LEVEL

floral hemlock
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😭

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can you make multiple tree models?

remote star
floral hemlock
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progress

edgy heron
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i think the water should look more wasteland-y or more polluted so that it matches the bg lol

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-# and also the worldmap

remote star
floral hemlock
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the bg will probably change

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depends on JPG

floral hemlock
remote star
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Yea the bg is diferent in levels too

floral hemlock
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then send me the in dm's the one you want

remote star
edgy heron
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it just depends on what the map ends up like lol

remote star
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@floral hemlock

floral hemlock
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^^

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eh, not bad

remote star
floral hemlock
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it's not a vertex paint

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it's an actual texture lmao

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5 secon fix if there is a tileset

remote star
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Nintendo...

remote star
floral hemlock
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yes

floral hemlock
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they could make more visible vertex paint

remote star
floral hemlock
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Are you still using the same train?

remote star
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Ill send the tileset for it so u could improve

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This is the train

floral hemlock
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oh my god

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wouldn't it be better recoloring this thing to red or black?

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😭

remote star
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Would break the level effect

floral hemlock
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😭

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i will break you instead

remote star
floral hemlock
remote star
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The train in this level is pretty big yea

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Bigger than the w3 one

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W5 will be bigger tho

floral hemlock
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holy fuck how the sand from w3 is so ugly

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i remade it

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@remote star

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i gotta make those foot prints smaller

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anyway, here full map in this moment

remote star
edgy heron
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JPEG MAKE HIM GO DOWN OR IM MURDERING YOU
WE NEED MORE VARIATION IN PATH Z POSITIONS mariopoint

floral hemlock
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i wanted to say that

edgy heron
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-# respectfully😁

remote star
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Ok ill do 😭

floral hemlock
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jpg we need atleast one jump variation

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it will be worth it

remote star
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I mean ill modfy the path animaion and map code anyways so its fine

floral hemlock
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could you show me jpg whole map in game?

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and pathing?

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how mario moves and sees?

remote star
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Oki

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Video?

floral hemlock
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yes

remote star
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@floral hemlock

crimson dome
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It also feels a bit weird to me that the skybox is randomly mirrored

floral hemlock
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I will do it the moment that I'm sure I'm happy with the placement and shape

floral hemlock
floral hemlock
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I need to put them out

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also could you please send me a screenshots of every level?

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in their most interesting part or something

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so I could know exactly their gimmicks and how they look like

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I want to express them on the map slightly

remote star
remote star
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The tree model is a separated file btw so when u export, export the model for the map, and then the model for the tree (the tree will have the: tree's, airship, jumping fish and ronzer)

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@floral hemlock

floral hemlock
remote star
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OH

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Mb

floral hemlock
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green

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leafs

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lmao

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I want to put them out somewhere and we good

remote star
remote star
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So thats why i said that

floral hemlock
remote star
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Wait no

remote star
edgy heron
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bevel is definetely better tho, but it can be problematic at times

floral hemlock
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rounded corners for yall

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@remote star how should i improve this part?

remote star
floral hemlock
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where volcano?

remote star
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In thr ground

floral hemlock
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jpg, i'll eat you

trail vapor
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imo the worldmap rn feels like some rocky plateaux on which the player walks on, and with some volcanoes randomly placed around, sometimes on these plateaux

floral hemlock
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yes

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that's called an island with dinosaurs

trail vapor
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what i had imagined was making a more island-like worldmap, with a bit more land, larger volcanoes which would blend with the ground

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kinda like how it looks like in the backgrounds, but on the worldmap

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literally imagine if the volcano backgrounds (the one i sent earlier and the one that is the current bg of the worldmap) were turned into a 3d space which mario could go around of, just more island-shaped

floral hemlock
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alr then listen, i'll add grass

trail vapor
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-# please don't force me to draw what it looks like in my head in ibis paint...

remote star
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Like they said

floral hemlock
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jpg dont annoy me

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sure

remote star
floral hemlock
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how to add grass

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how to grass

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too hard

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@remote star draw me a grass 😭

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or wait

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since the beach are will use island tileset

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then i will need to use this one too

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How can i pair those up to look good?

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ugh

remote star
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This grass for 2-A
And the island one for the beach grass

floral hemlock
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i'll remake this for you someday...

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@remote star funfact! you will be the first person (before zstar) to use my island tileset marioready

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and it will be extended + improved massively

remote star
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HELL YEAAAAA

floral hemlock
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but there is a problem

remote star
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Ronzer is nice ngl

floral hemlock
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how can i express this tileset here

remote star
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Hmm

remote star
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Or add a bridge with a higher part in tbe node, That would remove profunity tho

floral hemlock
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draw it jpg ;3

remote star
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So first option is better

trail vapor
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yes i had the sudden motivation to actually do it in ibis paint lol

floral hemlock
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alr im doing this thanks

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now help me out with the sand are

trail vapor
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yw!

floral hemlock
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a

trail vapor
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how 😭

floral hemlock
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i want to use somehow my island tileset 😭

trail vapor
# trail vapor something like that

also feel free to change this to whatever you want, or change things you don't like (or keep things you like). it's just a general idea of what i had imagined

floral hemlock
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alr, i'll figure out somehow the grass texture and i do this

trail vapor
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okay mariothumbsup

crimson dome
trail vapor
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thankss!!!

remote star
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Bester gave like the idea of the year bro

edgy heron
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considering jpeg said he'll remake the map i think you have all creativity at hand marioready

edgy heron
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jouner do this now MarioBOOM

remote star
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Click here with Yeah if you want to jouner to do this

remote star
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Nah

edgy heron
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aw

remote star
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I dont have the area ids anymore and remaking path animations is kinda lame

crimson dome
floral hemlock
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@trail vapor would you bean able to make this more detailed or explain in a way i could understand the way i should do it?

trail vapor
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for the big blue circle

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and for the other one it's just an edge (i should probably have filled the gap where the bit of water is)

trail vapor
trail vapor
trail vapor
# floral hemlock

also i feel like the volcano should be larger here (or at least i made it larger. if that's on purpose you can keep it)

floral hemlock
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Please think of that it might not be visible on the actual map so much

floral hemlock
crimson dome
edgy heron
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is that the 64ds texture for the lethal lava land interior lol

floral hemlock
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i want to do the lava similiarrly how the lava locked in W8, i don't really know how i could blend those too lol

floral hemlock
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if you have a DS screenshot so i could use it as a reference then it will be epic

trail vapor
crimson dome
floral hemlock
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it can fit if made well

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that's why i ask for a reference MarioOkay

floral hemlock
crimson dome
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Perhaps you should add some ground around the end of the lavafall so that it doesn't look like the lava is falling directly in the water, since I feel that looks odd

floral hemlock
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so it will look alr

trail vapor
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i feel like the ground should have a more island-like shape. part of it means rounder cornerd but idk if there's only that

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also i still kinda feel like the volcano is a bit too small. even if the top can't really be seen during gameplay, it would still feel like a large volcano

floral hemlock
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@remote star please try making transition texture

remote star
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i havd idea

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make a separate mesh for the grass in the shape

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and texture it

trail vapor
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what i had in mind was reusing part of the "grass patch" texture from some of the original nsmb worldmaps

remote star
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nsmbds w6 have it

floral hemlock
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alr then jpg dont do it till i check if it will be good

remote star
floral hemlock
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yeah sure

floral hemlock
# remote star sure

jpg please start pinging me less, just because i don't have a problem with it, doesn't mean that you shouldn't do it at all when typing small message

remote star
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idk why the shift didnt worked

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sorry abt that

floral hemlock
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😭

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yeah np

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i can make only this kind of thing while looking good

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i'll wait till jpg answers in dm's till continueing with this

remote star
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Gorgeous lava

floral hemlock
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you are too

remote star
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You too >:3

floral hemlock
floral hemlock
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@trail vapor so how you want me to do this place?

remote star
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Or rock thing

floral hemlock
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im tired of this shit

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see ya in the next month

remote star
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Looks good tho ngl

floral hemlock
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thanks jpg

remote star
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Why its the problem 😭

floral hemlock
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idk im tired

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good night jpg

remote star
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Gn! ^^

remote star
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Noticed w2 also need 4 levels to be finished

remote star
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Desert bg base ill use

remote star
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Bottom

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Both the clouds and this is from mfgg

remote star
remote star
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i HATE how this looks...

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I ACIDENRALLY TURNED THE WHOLE THING INTO A NORMAL MAP FUCK

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LMAO

trail vapor
trail vapor
floral hemlock
floral hemlock
floral hemlock
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man, 2k tris

floral hemlock
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remaking jpg's tileset because it annoys me

frail estuary
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Flat walls are yours, right?

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Looks good

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I do kinda like how the old grass has a slightly more blueish tint tho

floral hemlock
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it's because it's a rainy type of level

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i guess atleast

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i'll do it later

frail estuary
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Are you gonna make unique tiles for both directions of walls and corners?

floral hemlock
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nah

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it's ugly on this kind of tile

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i'll do only one pixel off like i always do

frail estuary
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What I meant was adding separate tiles for left and right walls/corners as opposed to just 1 that level designers can mirror

frail estuary
floral hemlock
frail estuary
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I got my answer but I didn't really understand what you said

trail vapor
# floral hemlock

i'm honestly not that much of a fan of this. you're kinda removing some of JPG64's unique ideas, like the unique grass pattern, the blue-ish-ness, and the roughness on the edges (even keeping it slightly would have been good imo)

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it does look better in quality but at the same time you're removing some of the ideas and charm imo

floral hemlock
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i was going onto more MKDS grass pattern but accidentaly started making NSMB W1 grass lmao

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atleast i made it near perfect 😎

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i leave decision on @remote star , if he wants a different grass design, i'll do it

fickle sphinx
# floral hemlock

sorta miss how the grey squares were sunken in while only the white squares popped out

edgy heron
floral hemlock
edgy heron
# floral hemlock

wait is it me or did the shading on the bottom right corner look a tad off

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like what with those brighter pixels in the middle of the darkness?

fickle sphinx
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from the rim of the grey square

floral hemlock
floral hemlock
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you are better at hueing than me

edgy heron
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i can’t rn so lol

floral hemlock
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lol, alr

edgy heron
floral hemlock
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New tree texture

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i'll play around with the shading still since it's mostly the same as original w5 one

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but yeah

severe heart
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It's more shiny now which probably looks better on a low-res DS screen.

floral hemlock
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definitly

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alr, final look

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imma render it now for the tileset lol

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nah

trail vapor
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isn't there one in the tileset already?

floral hemlock
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yes

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ugly one

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by me

edgy heron
trail vapor
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i think it looked fine already

floral hemlock
floral hemlock
trail vapor
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it doesn't look like that in the videos and screenshots

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the hue looks better in the screenshots that have been shown in the past

floral hemlock
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different tileset?

floral hemlock
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there was another tileset with tree but improved by myself

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yeah those

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still ugly tho lmao

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@edgy heron which one do you preffer?

crimson dome
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They're not ugly, go to bed Jouner

edgy heron
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i would only say the colors could be more vibrant like your Sakura tree but it doesn’t look bad at all

floral hemlock
edgy heron
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you aren’t seeing the tree from below 😭

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though 1 looks pretty stylish

floral hemlock
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yeah it's hard to do a perfect one

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since it's a low poly model still

remote star
floral hemlock
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JPG HIIIIIIII

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I MISSED YOU

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YOU WEREN'T ONLINE ALL DAY FOR ME

remote star
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I LOVE THIS

remote star
remote star
floral hemlock
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alr i know what i need to do to make the tree look good

floral hemlock
remote star
floral hemlock
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YES

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NOW I CAN PUT 5 MILLION POLY BOWSERS ASS

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INSIDE THE MAP

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AND IT WILL WORK

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what do you think of the tileset remake @remote star ?

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should i change somethign

remote star
floral hemlock
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what about the grass?

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people above didn't like that i did my own thing so much

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what do you think

remote star
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Looks really cute

floral hemlock
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yeah, it's very similliar to W1

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but still different a bit

remote star
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Yea

floral hemlock
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here comparison if anyone wants lol

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Do munchers have animation btw?

remote star
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Yea

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4 frames

floral hemlock
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4 FRAMES>??!?

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send me in dm's

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anyway

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made one

floral hemlock
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if it looped correctly it would look better lol

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i hate yall

cyan stirrup
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It's good, but looks too...

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Squishy

floral hemlock
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your mom

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then here 3 frames exactly like from smb3

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mine looks bad because i reverse the frames at later point

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here with 4 frames

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yes i know 3 frames

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thanks

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for yall opinion

remote star
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Someone know how i can make those rocks nsmb styled? (Brown ones)

warm condor
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use more colors

remote star
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I love how nsmbu used almost every smw bg and recreated it

floral hemlock
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NSMB2

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?

remote star
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Wait fr

remote star
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Ill try

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Looks ass

trail vapor
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it's probably because the edges of each surface always have the same color, while they should probably have more shading

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not exactly sure if it's why tho

remote star
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I tried separing it in layers and ill see if it helps

trail vapor
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now maybe apply some SLIGHT bevel on each layer

trail vapor
# remote star

also i'm not a big fan of the orange part of the bottom bg: it looks a bit too dark. and i think the hue should shift when the color goes darker/lighter

floral hemlock
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jpg, remake this

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i mean the clouds

floral hemlock
remote star
floral hemlock
remote star
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Im bad making every type of clouds in bg

floral hemlock
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that's why copying original nsmb backgrounds exists!

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for me it's easier because i know how to manipulate thing so they could look right after compression

remote star
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Im replicating this

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So i used smw cloud

crimson dome
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You could take a look at the chicken clouds background so you can have a reference

trail vapor
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the chicken clouds πŸ”πŸ˜­

trail vapor
# remote star

the orange is too dark and the gradient/color shifting is a bit too strong imo

fickle sphinx
floral hemlock
# fickle sphinx whats wrong with the clouds

They do not completally fit the NSMB artstyle at all, if JPG wants this effect then it's alright but there is also another problem which is the shading of those clouds, the colours of it are i would say "dead' due to how grey those are

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also made a cloud real quick to remember if i still being able to

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16 colours

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or 15 not sure

edgy heron
floral hemlock
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smw clouds

edgy heron
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big chunk looks fine to me minus the colors which you mentioned lol

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but yeah the smw clouds could be done different

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-# like my snow bg trolling

floral hemlock
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this is already better

edgy heron
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could be executed better but yeah

floral hemlock
# remote star

JPG, i actually like how you made that mountain thing,. meybe just smooth out the edges by one more colour and it's perfect

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also for the bg you could maybe use the gradient ones i have made long time ago?

floral hemlock
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lmao

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if someone wants to steal the cloud then here

remote star
remote star
floral hemlock
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actually nice

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could've been better tho

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but very good either way

remote star
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Without the bg

floral hemlock
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jpg do you want to know how to make clouds?

remote star
trail vapor
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pretty much

remote star
trail vapor
remote star
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Sure

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Again whats bevel

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Sorry if im being dumb

trail vapor
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idk how to explain

remote star
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-# why i said "again" i never asked beforr 😭

trail vapor
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but like, 3d shading kind of thing

remote star
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I see

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Ill watch a tutorial

floral hemlock
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welcome to jouner shitty tutorial on certain thing, today i'm gonna to show you all how to make a basic clouds that fits the style of NSMB DS

  1. Start with the shape (It can be whatever you want(I recommend using circle shapes to make it look more π“π“’π“œπ“‘ 𝓼𝓽𝔂𝓡𝓲𝓼𝓱)
trail vapor
floral hemlock
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  1. select the cloud shape and change it to the darker col and make another layer, now select gradient tool and select the gradient that makes the circle like shape. Now at the round parts add some lighter colours (for me putting 3-5 times gradient at that places is enough)
  2. continue this shit in other parts
remote star
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Ohhhh

trail vapor
remote star
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I selected the wrong tool

floral hemlock
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  1. after you done whole cloud, it looks still bad right? that's why we saved the white part (or any lighter colour you added) onto another layer. Take the eraser tool, set the hardness to very small % and start making sharp edges (not sure how to call them) and generally fix the shading to resemble more cloudy like
floral hemlock
floral hemlock
remote star
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It dont exist in ibis 😭

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Theres airbrush tho

trail vapor
floral hemlock
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  1. Take your whole cloud (merge the layers before too.) and take them to any program that let's you compress the colours (Color quantizer, nitropaint etc.)
    and set the colours to AROUND 16 or more
trail vapor
floral hemlock
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Now congratulations, you got a NSMB styled cloud, with more practice and spend time on you will make a very good looking one that fits perfectly to the style

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please look at the original backgrounds or other stuff to be more sure of how they should exactly look like.

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thanks

remote star
floral hemlock
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here if someone wants to play around with it

remote star
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@floral hemlock opnions?

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Your technique is peak ngl

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Top bg is suposed to be like that

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Top + bottom

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Details

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@floral hemlock u think i could improve this?

floral hemlock
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yes, the bottom one

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especially the sky gradient

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and clouds hue

remote star
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Could u try doing improvemrnts to me? πŸ₯Ί im kinda dumb

floral hemlock
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can't rn. sorru

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just make the clouds more orange

remote star
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And the cliffs, u think they fit?

floral hemlock
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i like them marioready

remote star
floral hemlock
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jpg, orange

remote star
floral hemlock
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ORANGE

remote star
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Sillhouette level

floral hemlock
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jpg please look at the sillouthe levels backgrounds more

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please

edgy heron
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make the cloud a lighter yellow and shade it to orange marioready

remote star
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It looks compressed as hell so sadly ill not use it

remote star
remote star
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Lmao

floral hemlock
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no jpg

remote star
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Normal map and other stuff on images look funny

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Normal map only

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Other light type

remote star
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Light without normal map

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Btw im using those effect layers

remote star
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@floral hemlock could u add that tileset to this island here? The one ur remaking

floral hemlock
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WHAT

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which one

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my original one or MKDS pattern one

remote star
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Its for the level wich use that tileset

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That level (wich is 2-A now)

remote star
floral hemlock
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SEND ME THE ROM

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IN DMS

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πŸ—£οΈ

remote star
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OPS

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Sure

floral hemlock
remote star
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Lemme upload

floral hemlock
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that screenshot still has old lava texture I used lol

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I'm using now mkds one which fits way more

remote star
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Ohhh

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Nice!

remote star
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@floral hemlock ill send in dm's

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Done

floral hemlock
floral hemlock
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4 B?

remote star
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πŸ₯Ί

floral hemlock
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😭

remote star
floral hemlock
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why record??

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is this that new level you made?

remote star
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Yea

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Sillhouete level with weird bg

floral hemlock
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ah alr

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JPG

remote star
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I got a name idea for this level....

floral hemlock
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IM GONNA LITERALLY START IMPROVING YOUR LEVELS

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SOON

remote star
remote star
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FINALLY SSMB WILL BE GOOD

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-# its already pretty fun but still

floral hemlock
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lmao im not zstar

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but i would be happy to imrpove things that are just straight up bad design

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which so far it's most of the levels i have played lmao

remote star
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Decoration in the void πŸ”₯

floral hemlock
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Alright i finally finished this level

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i'll give an opinion in a second

floral hemlock
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Alright so i generally really like this theme and level, you very much improved the graphics here which i'm very happy actually.
But there are 2 problems, one big one

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that fucking first star coin

too much power ups

remote star
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Before releasing the game i should remake the level intros

floral hemlock
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yes do it

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without the enemies in it would've been great too

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or atleast good renders

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could you send me this tileset in dm's btw?

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i want to see if i can improve it slightly

remote star
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Hd renders

floral hemlock
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you know jpg? i'll actualy improve this level now lol

remote star
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Sure

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All the star coins u should use mecha koopas to collect btw

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When u improve it send in the dm's

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Oh btw

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On the end of the level u will see that outside of the view theres a wall of tiles

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DONT remove it otherwise the game softlocks

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@floral hemlock

floral hemlock
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i wanted to make a funreference with cactus but i realized it would look like swastika

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😭

remote star
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NO

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😭

floral hemlock
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i wanted to do him

remote star
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Yea dont do it 😭

warm condor
remote star
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The music is good tho

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Kourtiss did a excelent work on it

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2 songs and ssmb ost will be 100% original

floral hemlock
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the music is great lol

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such a banger

remote star
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IKR

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Ssmb ost imo is a banger

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THE CHECKPOINT IS IN A PERFECT PLACE

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I moved the shy guy to another platform

floral hemlock
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nice

remote star
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Yea true

floral hemlock
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pls bring back map progression

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and force will to code bottom screen powerups

remote star
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Nah i want to have a harder game

floral hemlock
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JPG, YOUR HARD GAME IS JUST BAD DESIGN

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DONT ANNOY ME

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LMAO

remote star
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No bottom item 😭

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And map progression kinda exists still

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Just smaller

floral hemlock
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JPG

remote star
floral hemlock
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REDESIGN THE BOTTOM SCREEN

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NOW

remote star
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Ill do later i promisse

floral hemlock
trail vapor
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especially in world 4, that's too much. it would probably have bren alright in world 1 (usually early w1)

remote star
trail vapor
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some sections also lack of coins enemies and blocks

floral hemlock
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@remote star because of you i got 200+ hours in blender

trail vapor
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i'm also not a fan of how the brick blocks and coins look like in silhouette levels

remote star
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I love blender

trail vapor
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i already explained why for the silhouette for the brick blocks. for the coins, they just don't feel "silhouette-y"

remote star
remote star
floral hemlock
remote star
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Same as the ? blocks

remote star
floral hemlock
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if yall were curious, this is how the W2 looks like so far

trail vapor
floral hemlock
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JPG PLEASE STAY AWAY FROM ME

remote star
floral hemlock
floral hemlock
trail vapor
floral hemlock
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and get traumatized

warm condor
remote star
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WHAT THE FUCK IS THAT JOUNER 😭

trail vapor
trail vapor
# floral hemlock

maybe it would be better if it was like world 3 of the vanilla game, with slopes all around (idk how to explain)

remote star
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Ill never play fnaf again

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I got ptsd

trail vapor
# floral hemlock

also having one of the ends of the bridges randomly float slightly above the ground feels weird

trail vapor
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also, why is there some red stuff on the palm trees?? are they radioactive because of the lava or something??

trail vapor
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ohh

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well ok then

remote star
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Ill rename this world to tropical paradise

trail vapor
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it's not really a paradise with volcanoes

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also do you actually have a beach level for the world or not?

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having a beach level spot on the map is cool, but it wouldn't really make sense if it wasn't the case

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wait you said it was world 2? is it 2-3?

remote star
floral hemlock
trail vapor
trail vapor
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nvm i found it

remote star
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Ill give up on this soonβ„’

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Rexy staring the train

floral hemlock
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if you send that image again i ping zstar and ask him to ban you

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jk

floral hemlock
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ITS COOL

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this is the best one jpg πŸ˜”

remote star
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Rexy Express

floral hemlock
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@remote star I have a problem

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which i consider as a bad design

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And it's with the textures on the map

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there is literally 4 ground textures

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and i think it shouldn't be like that and the limit of textures with different tileset should be limited to max 3

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Now i need your opinion on that

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Should i remove the island texture and replace it with the MKDS one? (It mean's that island tileset will have the MKDS ground rather my original one)
or i should keep it?

shy wraith
floral hemlock
trail vapor
trail vapor
floral hemlock
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wanted to show yall how the enemies i have made models/sprites look like since jpg only showed them with bad quality or something else (galoomba not mine obv)

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i'm very proud of goonie actually!

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he looks great

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i wish tho that JPG improves his wing animation to be more accurate

elder crystal
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So rare to see a high quality recording of this hack lol

floral hemlock
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that's why i post it here since it annoyed me all the time and i want to show few of my stuff i made for this hack in high quality too

elder crystal
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You and jpg have been doing great work, keep it up πŸ’ͺ

remote star
floral hemlock
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Decided to scrap whole map that i have made and return to the origins! Welcome back old W2!!!

floral hemlock
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dw about it

floral hemlock
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man, i think someone broke into my account recently

remote star
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hey ztar

remote star
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the mountains was great

floral hemlock
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man i wish w2 had a castle level

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so much smw stuff but no castles πŸ’”

remote star
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this is a isolated island so makes sense no castle but a train

floral hemlock
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how did you name those silver coins jpg?

remote star
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but on w4, u can add a broken fortress in the last node since it will be a castle-like thing

floral hemlock
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shuriken coins or just silver coins

remote star
floral hemlock
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alr, thanks

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im changing the sprites just and i hate how you named them lmao

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1
2
332
3

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lmaooo

remote star
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dont make normal silver coins btw

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since they already exist in ssmb

floral hemlock
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i'm just adding those i have made

remote star
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gotcha

floral hemlock
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i mean these

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man i wish they look better after nitro painting them

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i gotta make them even better one day

trail vapor
floral hemlock
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here is the new coin!

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because JPG is very lazy and didn't do it before!

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love u

warm condor
remote star
crimson dome
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I think they're squished in the NSMBU style of SMM2 so it kinda makes sense

remote star
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yea true

warm condor
remote star
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nsmbu and smm2

warm condor
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i'm pretty sure that there are no galoombas on SMM2 outside SMW style

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only goombas and goombrats

tardy vessel
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Oh wow

crimson dome
warm condor
warm condor
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the only game that i know that galoombas can be squished is SM3DW

remote star
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yea oddysey too

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and smm2

floral hemlock
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Recorded 2-2 (or 2-A soon)

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2 words

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Hate it

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.....

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@remote star what do you think you are doing wrong in your levels?

remote star
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Imo its nice level

floral hemlock
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im curious if you realize the problems of the designs

floral hemlock
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oh

floral hemlock
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but the gameplay πŸ₯€

remote star
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Imo out of all of them 4-A is the only one i really dislike

floral hemlock
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I actually missed one are but i'm not sure yet how to get in there lol

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fuck

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i needed to compress that from 200mb to 45 πŸ’”

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i got war flashbacks from illy's vid on the fish part lmao

tardy vessel
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ong

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acorn mario

remote star
remote star
remote star
floral hemlock
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I'll say after i'll play more of your levels alright?

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you can only get my opinion from 4-B

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which was actually a cool level

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wish very small issues

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anyway im remaking 2-A

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it will be the same but better lol

remote star
floral hemlock
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what is this?

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it appears on munchers

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it was supposed to be solid?

remote star
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Now its in jyotyu

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Muncher was going to be only in this level

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But then i decided that i would use it mote

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More

floral hemlock
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ah alright

crimson dome
# floral hemlock

JPG I thought you had fixed all the issues in this level πŸ₯€

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This was one of the levels from the demo that I seriously felt it needed many improvements

remote star
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I never touched it ever since πŸ’”

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But yea it need improvements

crimson dome
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I seriously suggest you to start testing your own levels more and without any savestates, and if a level is very annoying to play then it means that you must improve it

remote star
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I usually dont use savestates anymore, but i didn't died much in my levels so i never noticed a error n such

warm condor
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i thought that everybody tested their own levels more often without savesates MarioDerp

remote star
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I used savestates before in my videos, but nowdays i dont really uses savestates anymore

crimson dome
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I'm just gonna give you a few tips:

  • Don't add enemies in places that make them really hard or impossible to dodge (specially in very tight platforms)
  • Don't add places that are very annoying to access or very tedious to traverse (examples of this are very tight spaces or 1 block wide platforms)
  • Don't add any star coins or secrets in places that are practically impossible to predict (a star coin where you have to fall in an abyss without any indication is not very intuitive at all)
remote star
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I see

trail vapor
remote star
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I replaced the last frame with the 2nd and now it looks good n faster

trail vapor
remote star
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-> It closes, open halfway, open full, close halfway ->

trail vapor
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a few that come to my mind:

  • remove pine trees that are above the abyss/pit/void. they're counter-intuitive and don't make much sense
  • warps from falling downwards. they're not great imo: hard to predict, hard to fall properly/to reach, etc
  • lower the pipe cannon in the underground section. i remember struggling to get on top of it last time, especially with the munchers around
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also sometimes the platforming feels very tight, which is also an issue i have with the level

warm condor
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the warps from falling downwards would be fine if there were at least some coins

trail vapor
crimson dome
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There were also a few tiling errors that I believe you should fix

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For example:

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This tree gets cropped because of the mucher below, you should remove that muncher

crimson dome
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This pipe joint is not aligned with the pipe above which looks very odd, I also feel this should be a connected pipe instead of a regular pipe entrance

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Also, NEVER make 1 tile tall/wide enterable pipes, that looks ugly, you should always try to make them at least 2, 3 or more tiles wide/tall

trail vapor
remote star
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LMAOOOOO

trail vapor
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also please make it into a connected pipe. i know you can do that jpg (if you don't know how, look at that one nsmbhd page or the wiki)

warm condor
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i learnt how to use connections by watching some pipes in 7-A MarioOkay

floral hemlock
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@remote star is this actor different than in the original?

trail vapor
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didn't see, mb

floral hemlock
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something like this

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camera vertical

remote star
edgy heron
# floral hemlock

where even was the 3rd yoshi coin in this level? i could never find it 😭

remote star
remote star
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Actually nvm, i can add it rq

floral hemlock
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made this

edgy heron
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THIS IS IT

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jpeg why 😭😭

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you shoulda atleast added a few coins CryingCat

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glad you changed it tho

floral hemlock
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i found it in a first try lmao

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you can see in the vid

edgy heron
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im talking about the pipe lol, the one out of the view

floral hemlock
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ah pipe 😭

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sow eird

trail vapor
edgy heron
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to be fair i think this level could make use of a gimmick of sorts, it feels pretty non-gimmicky

floral hemlock
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here is more of the gimmick

edgy heron
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i mean something combined with the munchers!

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like putting snailicorns or rex's on the munchers would def make it better

floral hemlock
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if custom actors displayed normalyl there wouldve been

edgy heron
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since the munchers alone are pretty stalemate(?)

floral hemlock
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thats why i leave it to jpg and just say him in dm's what enemies and put some elements to indicate that where he should put them

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but yeah, rozner will be cool here

remote star