#[4k] Dreamy Desert (catbug)

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amber hollow
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Song: Dreamy Desert
Artists: Shady Monk, FLOOR BABA
Style: tech dump (mostly 16/24 polyrhythm streams)
Rating: 28.30
first complete tech dump yay
still need a load of feedback though, particularly on how i should nerf a certain burst (you will know what one when you see it)

thick hinge
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good concept for a chart but yeah those spikes don't fit in at all lol

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i would tone it down on the layering personally, you could experiment with keeping the minijacks but those are what feel out of place to me

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or you could even just do 16th gluts at that section maybe

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also PR in the slow part could make it more fun

amber hollow
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first attempt to nerf the funny burst of death

thick hinge
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jumptrillable ๐Ÿ‘

amber hollow
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idk how to do pr
i kinda just put notes where it sounds like they make sense and then they arent
wouldnt be surprised if it turns out im tone deaf tbh

amber hollow
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also are all the bursts out of place or just the one that kills you

thick hinge
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there are 4 bursts that kill you

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and yeah they all feel the same to me

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PR is quite simple really if a note is higher pitched than the last one then place it further to the right

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i.e. A B C D notes can go to left down up right taps

amber hollow
thick hinge
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that variation is much better

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actually aa'able now

amber hollow
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ok cool anything else or is it fine now

thick hinge
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as far as i can tell it's good

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i'm not great at critiquing

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sorry i didn't reply sooner i didn't scroll down to see if the thread updated lol