#(4k) To: Alice Liddell [Valycian]

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past hatch
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Song: To: Alice Liddell
Artist: Morimori Atsushi
Style: idk technical
Rating: 17ish msd

First file i stepped from beginning to end since i stopped stepping years ago. im not even good enough to play this so feedback would be much appreciated. Valycian will also be the alias i'll be using

wispy yoke
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fun chart, my thoughts:

  • that chordjack section is far to large of a diff spike imo, i think you should attempt to rework it (then again i haven't played in weeks and am not warmed up)
  • layering the clock ticking noise on some of the sections that are just single notes may help in making it feel less empty
  • about 25 seconds in, you should chart the backing drums. I think theyre prominent enough to deserve notes.
  • around 1:30, keep charting the piano alongside the other stuff. I get that its meant to be a break but it just make it feel like that part isnt finished

otherwise, pretty good

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(take my criticism with a grain of salt since im not a veteran charting professional or anything)