#Please review this section of my last employment

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hoary tangle
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Just adding a new work experience to my resume, is this too many bullet points? Should I just have more projects instead of the process of what I did?

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cyan kestrel
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i would say too many bullet points

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you have a typo in the very first bullet point

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could just say “Led the development of Dataflow frontend using Angular, GraphQL, and Java, resulting in ….”

hoary tangle
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@static depot

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how about this?