This engineer needs a second pair of eyes - Full stack 3YOE

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Hi members of this cool Discord server,

Hope you're having an awesome day! 🌟

I'm Elijah and I saw that this @channel offers resume reviews, which is fantastic! I'm currently applying for Frontend and Full Stack Web Engineering roles and would love to get some expert feedback on my resume.

Would it be possible for you to take a quick look at my resume? I've attached it here for your convenience. No rush, whenever you have a moment to spare would be awesome! Just look it over and tell me what you see, as a recruiter, hiring manager or senior engineer.

Thanks a bunch for offering this service, and I really appreciate your time! 😊

Best regards,
Elijah

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And how does it compare to this? I tried really hard to compress it to a one-pager as recommended. Am I missing anything?

[shrewd sand]

bolding “employee” is an odd choice

i would relax on some of the bolding in general, too much of it and some of it doesn’t particularly make a lot of sense

not a fan of the projects section in either format, i would consider removing all together

adding the horizontal line between each experience makes it confusing since its generally used to block between each section

can drop SWE in the title

u have zero languages and technologies used in the actual bullet points

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😂

my bad