#Junior In college looking for second internship
stable sable
hushed blaze
implemented innovative strategies…
ok what strategies..?
Handled Python scripts…
main thing about this bullet point is “so what?” what are u trying to convey with this bullet, what reaction are u trying to get? its a very generic bullet point and doesnt mean much to anybody reading it
Supported clear communication
fluff
quick scan of projects, they are good
vague wraith
Do education, exp, projects, ec, and tech skills
Remove open to remote
Project descriptions can be shorten imo
vague wraith
Yeah
stable sable
So skills on bottom?
vague wraith
Yeah I’m p sure most recruiters would care more about where u worked than skills u claim to have
Also
Another
Thing I noticed is u use a lot of subjective words
stable sable
Like what
vague wraith
“Innovative strategies”, “intelligent algorithm” acc 2nd one isn’t really subjective but I do think a lot of stuff u explicitly mention is already implied
Also if u alread have sde for the bank in bold idt u need to restate again
For the thing under w italics
stable sable
I only had it bc the template I used had it