#Junior in college looking for second internship

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fringe sleet
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hackathons arent exp

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put those in projects

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other than that anything else?

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hmmm font looks kinda small

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make sure u remove the fluff in your bullet points

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Its small cuz im tryna fit it all on a page

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what parts would u consider fluff

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looking at it i guess u dont have much

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would try to simplify stuff, it is pretty dense

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develop the first 2 bullet points of your internship

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  • Authored comprehensive reports and developed useful tools to bolster the functionality of complex systems
    • Implemented innovative strategies and tactics that enhanced system monitoring efficiency by a notable 12% reducing downtime.

how does that sound?

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hmmmm but what tools, what strategies/tactics

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its a bit broad

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i would also say writing docs isnt that interesting imo idk

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Authored comprehensive reports using Jira and confluence to bolster the functionality of complex systems

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yeah it isnt but its a lot of what I do lol

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oh no 🥲

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u can put em together i guess

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Yeah your right

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  • Implemented innovative strategies and tactics that enhanced system monitoring efficiency by a notable 12% reducing downtime.
    • Produced 5 documents in support of complex systems, such as System Design Documents and user procedure guides per week using Jira and Confluence to bolster the functionality of complex systems.
    • Implemented a System Logger project using Java and Python, tracking the daily activities of approximately 10 employees daily.
    • Handled and converted 3 Python and or CMD/BASH scripts per week

hows that look?

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whats that last one

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converted to what

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Wording is bad ig

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CMD -> BASH

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i mean what do you convert

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you have 3 scripts to do per week 🤔

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its a .cmd file i turn into .sh

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Handled Python scripts and converted 3 CMD scripts into BASH scripts per week.

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Look better?

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Also added this line to make it look larger cuz it was getting small

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Supported clear communication between different teams with regular updates and feedback discussions, leading to ongoing improvements in system efficiency and user satisfaction.

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